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Ohhh La La

A big heart that only knows how to grow taller
a life full of grace and fulfillment even when it goes lower
immeasurable challenges, yet you crush them all with one premolar
you shine your light so bright for a bottomless pit to experience solar.
Your Cinderella voice turns every moment to Christmas and Salah,
I am so used to its tenderness for Mariah Carey to sound like Godzilla.
The angels responsible for your memorable day are twin sisters with power
one is beautiful, dressed in the moon whose name is Isabella,
the other outshines the sparkles of all Galaxies and she is called Emmanuella.
The colourful package with passionate hugs will be delivered by Mr. Miller
and he has been strictly instructed not to lose a single flower.
I have paid already and everlasting Joy is the biller
so rejoice my lovely friend and disturb the streets with your ohh-la-la!
Agents of all goodness, come together at your doorstep to holla
wishing you many more years of love, goodness and satisfaction
Happy birthday my beautiful friend… Hurray!... Ohhh la la!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Edmonds  Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 6:30 PM
A beautiful poem to have received by your friend on her birthday Funom, a lucky lady… Belle
Makama Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so muh Belle
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 3:57 PM
So beautiful! She is a lucky lady to be presented with such an amazing birthday poem. I am sure she is very special! Best wishes, Dear Poet ~ Mala
Makama Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Thank you so much Malabika Ray
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:55 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful birthday write and picture. One special lady. Hope she loved it. Have a blessed day.................
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Yeah, she did and I was so glad... Thank you very much Paula.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:26 AM
A most delightful birthday dedication, Funom. I hope she gets to read this! ~ Regards // paul
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Yes Paul... she did and we are all very happy. Thank you very much for your comment.
Pettit Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Quite a great write with its descriptiveness and rhyming. Crafted very well.
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you so much Robert
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 6:20 AM
WoW! Funom, What a fantastic birthday write for your friend; I'm sure she just loved it. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Thank you so much Alexis... I really appreciate this
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