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Ohh Heartbreaking - Hlm

challenges in life positivity wins race music fulfills soul Holly bragged to be awesome singer fans believed she should be the winner until joined acclaimed contest, she tried to perform her best heartbroken~ trophy eluded her. playing harp with soft delicate fingers Holly's music came alive January 21, 2022 Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina Syllables checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE

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Charles Messina
Date: 3/16/2022 7:23:00 PM
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Dear Mala, just getting back to you to Congratulate you on your win in my contest with this splendid write. You combined these forms together well! Blessings Charlie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/13/2022 4:23:00 AM
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I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara..Playing the harp. I wonder if that was after death.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2022 12:05:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Sad she did not win. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/11/2022 4:55:00 AM
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Failure? Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/25/2022 7:33:00 PM
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That is a sweet theme you used. Very nice, Mala.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2022 8:19:00 PM
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I think I’d call it “harp”breaking ;)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/22/2022 6:23:00 AM
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Ha ha! That's a great title, Kim - you are very creative!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2022 12:10:00 PM
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Hello Mala, at least she gave it her best shot. Good luck in the contest. Friendship and Love, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/22/2022 6:21:00 AM
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Hello Mala, you re welcome Enjoy your day my friend. Friendship & Love. Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/21/2022 12:12:00 PM
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Yes, Darlene, so true. Thank you for reading my poem. Means a lot.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/21/2022 12:07:00 PM
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Your message very well expressed in the Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku! Challenges are our best teachers. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/21/2022 12:10:00 PM
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Thanks, Paulette. Your encouraging thoughtful comment means a lot. I am not done with the third part - Monoku.

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