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Ohh Heartbreaking - Hlm

challenges in life
                   positivity wins race
                   music fulfills soul

           
           Holly bragged to be awesome singer
           fans believed she should be the winner
           until joined acclaimed contest,
           she tried to perform her best
           heartbroken~ trophy eluded her.


  playing harp with soft delicate fingers Holly's music came alive 
           
        
    
                                         January 21, 2022
                              Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: Charles Messina
                                 Syllables checked by HMS.com
                                          SECOND PLACE

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Charles Messina Date: 3/16/2022 7:23:00 PM Dear Mala, just getting back to you to Congratulate you on your win in my contest with this splendid write. You combined these forms together well! Blessings Charlie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/13/2022 4:23:00 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara..Playing the harp. I wonder if that was after death. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/11/2022 12:05:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Sad she did not win. Have a blessed day/weekend.................. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 3/11/2022 4:55:00 AM Failure? Beautifully written. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/25/2022 7:33:00 PM That is a sweet theme you used. Very nice, Mala. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2022 8:19:00 PM I think I’d call it “harp”breaking ;) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/22/2022 6:23:00 AM Ha ha! That's a great title, Kim - you are very creative!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/21/2022 12:10:00 PM Hello Mala, at least she gave it her best shot. Good luck in the contest. Friendship and Love, Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/22/2022 6:21:00 AM Hello Mala, you re welcome Enjoy your day my friend. Friendship & Love. Darlene. Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/21/2022 12:12:00 PM Yes, Darlene, so true. Thank you for reading my poem. Means a lot.

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 1/21/2022 12:07:00 PM Your message very well expressed in the Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku! Challenges are our best teachers. Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulette Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/21/2022 12:10:00 PM Thanks, Paulette. Your encouraging thoughtful comment means a lot. I am not done with the third part - Monoku.