Oh, what a day

Oh, that your word and spirit,
Could compass the land and sea.
Flowing,throughout the streams,
Clouds pouring down upon all heads.
The birds fly in excitement to sing,
From north, south , east, and west
Of the truth, nourishing into eternal life.
All life has received a new breath,
Those who have never heard,
Might witness there is a new transformation of even the trees clapping,
The wolf has seen the Lamb as his own.
The land could be in peace and calmness,
No longer suffering from the sins of Man.
Mankind is floating above the oldself,
Into a new creation not born of flesh.
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Date: 2/13/2025 8:44:00 AM
What a joyful day it will be when there is peace in all the land. God bless. love phyl
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Date: 2/11/2025 11:44:00 AM
Your vision is comforting Stephan. “Mankind is floating above the oldself” - what a line!
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/12/2025 6:48:00 PM
May, God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with inexpressable peace, joy,love and overflowing of the promised inheritance of the Holy Spirit dwelling within : )
Date: 2/8/2025 12:12:00 AM
It is always delightful to imagine the advent of such a blissful day when there is peace and calmness all through the land and when there will be no more suffering through the sins of man and when all men become a new creation, rejoicing in God. Lovely thoughts, dear Stephan.
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/8/2025 12:38:00 PM
Amen, valsa would be a blessing but all glory and praise to the God of the Living for giving us access to receive inwardly peace, joy, comfort in a world of chaos
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/8/2025 12:37:00 PM
All glory to God my dear friend, May, God bless, comfort,guide and fill you with inexpressable peace,love,joy and overflowing of the promised inheritance of the Holy Spirit: )
Date: 2/7/2025 4:34:00 PM
- It would be a wonderful day... in peace and love, Stephan :) - hugs
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/8/2025 12:37:00 PM
All glory to God my dear friend, May, God bless, comfort,guide and fill you with inexpressable peace,love,joy and overflowing of the promised inheritance of the Holy Spirit: )
Date: 2/7/2025 11:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write with a great ending. Love the trees clapping. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/fun day as you write away..................
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/7/2025 1:16:00 PM
All glory to God my dear friend, May, God bless, comfort,guide and fill you with inexpressable peace,love,joy and overflowing of the promised inheritance of the Holy Spirit: )
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