Oh Well

Bill stared at a cute butt going by.
Wishing he were much bolder, he sighed,
"I would give all my pay
To roll that in the hay."
But looked up to see 'she' was a guy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 8, 2014 at 11:39 PM
Robert, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 3:47 PM
yep, sometimes it happens that way!!! Good one, Robert, and congrats for your win.
Nance Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Haha oh funny. way to go, grats on your winning limerick :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Fine Limerick Robert! Congrats on top win!
Mehta Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Nice twist at the end, Robert. Congrats on the win
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Funny Robert..congrats
United Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 5:15 PM
a well deserved winner. Jan & Darren
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Brilliantly funny a well deserved winner. hugs Jan x
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Good thing he noticed in time! Still...quite witty! congrats on your fine win. // paul
Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:48 PM
LOL well ... [be careful what you wish for aye?] Congrad's on your win.
Halliday Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Funny. Had to share it with coworkers.
Candler Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Thanks much. If you like humor try: The Doctor Is A Dead Man Walking; The Right Thing To Do; Last Laugh; Twelve Doubles; Sister Sister; The Happy Dress.
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