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Bill stared at a cute butt going by. Wishing he were much bolder, he sighed, "I would give all my pay To roll that in the hay." But looked up to see 'she' was a guy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/8/2014 11:39:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/7/2014 3:47:00 PM
yep, sometimes it happens that way!!! Good one, Robert, and congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/7/2014 11:43:00 AM
Haha oh funny. way to go, grats on your winning limerick :)
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:28:00 AM
Fine Limerick Robert! Congrats on top win!
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Date: 7/7/2014 5:57:00 AM
Nice twist at the end, Robert. Congrats on the win
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Date: 7/6/2014 7:40:00 PM
Funny Robert..congrats
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Date: 7/6/2014 5:15:00 PM
a well deserved winner. Jan & Darren
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:37:00 PM
Brilliantly funny a well deserved winner. hugs Jan x
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Date: 7/6/2014 4:03:00 PM
Good thing he noticed in time! Still...quite witty! congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 7/6/2014 3:48:00 PM
LOL well ... [be careful what you wish for aye?] Congrad's on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2014 2:28:00 PM
Funny. Had to share it with coworkers.
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Robert Candler
Date: 5/16/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thanks much. If you like humor try: The Doctor Is A Dead Man Walking; The Right Thing To Do; Last Laugh; Twelve Doubles; Sister Sister; The Happy Dress.