Oh Well

Bill stared at a cute butt going by. Wishing he were much bolder, he sighed, "I would give all my pay To roll that in the hay." But looked up to see 'she' was a guy.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:39:00 PM

Robert, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2014 3:47:00 PM

yep, sometimes it happens that way!!! Good one, Robert, and congrats for your win.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/7/2014 11:43:00 AM

Haha oh funny. way to go, grats on your winning limerick :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/7/2014 7:28:00 AM

Fine Limerick Robert! Congrats on top win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2014 5:57:00 AM

Nice twist at the end, Robert. Congrats on the win

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2014 7:40:00 PM

Funny Robert..congrats

Jadazzle United

Date: 7/6/2014 5:15:00 PM

a well deserved winner. Jan & Darren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2014 4:37:00 PM

Brilliantly funny a well deserved winner. hugs Jan x

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2014 4:03:00 PM

Good thing he noticed in time! Still...quite witty! congrats on your fine win. // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/6/2014 3:48:00 PM

LOL well ... [be careful what you wish for aye?] Congrad's on your win.

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/14/2014 2:28:00 PM

Funny. Had to share it with coworkers.

Robert Candler
Date: 5/16/2014 10:35:00 AM

Thanks much. If you like humor try: The Doctor Is A Dead Man Walking; The Right Thing To Do; Last Laugh; Twelve Doubles; Sister Sister; The Happy Dress.