Beata Agustin Poet Personification

OH WATERMELON

With my succulence, I can quench your thirst
hydrating well-being midst calmness-bliss
offering nutritious benefits 
toward functional zest of vibrant mirth...

Yes, enjoy my refreshing presence
midst wondrous fellowship with loved ones 
along rejuvenating laughter spree
ending in prayer, thanking God*... then have slurps of me.

Philippians 4:6 Be careful for nothing; but in every thing by prayer and supplication with thanksgiving let your requests be made known unto God.

November 4, 2025
3rd place, "PERSONALLY SPEAKING" Personification Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 11/5/2025

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Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2025 at 12:05 PM I like how you had the watermelon talking to us. It's my favorite fruit. Congrats on the win

Sam Kauffman November 5, 2025 at 11:01 AM Beata, congratulations on your win. I love the way your watermelon offers itself up to nourish, refresh and bring together both you and a fellowship. A sweet gift from the heart of our Creator! Blessings and hugs to you!

Jenish Somadas November 4, 2025 at 11:41 PM A vivid, refreshing poem! Truly makes one feel the joy and calmness you describe. Good luck in the contest!