Oh, Spring My Love

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Written, April 13, 2024
For the contest, Sonnet-Lipogram
Sponsor, Emile Pinet

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Oh, Spring my love I feel now your sweet hug, you send soft breezes to stroke- to entice; Spring your loving fingers . . . my serene drug, I longed for you through winters coldest ice. Putting on my prettiest dress for you, so we will frolic ~ spin ~ twirling, whirling; under the sun . . . under the sky bright blue, even the wildflowers will be swirling. We will stroll where lovers left their footprints, oh, they felt hope for their love to flourish; the lovely girls in flowered cotton chintz, I love you Spring for my soul- you nourish. Spring, I listen to you whisper to me; in the nighttime . . . where I exist with thee.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/13/2024 6:13:00 PM

Dear Constance, What a tender ode to the season of renewal and rebirth. Your words are such an expression of the joy and anticipation that comes with the arrival of spring, as nature awakens from its slumber. I loved your imagery of soft breezes, twirling dresses, and whispering nights which evokes a sense of serenity and enchantment. Constance, your deep connection to the season shines through, expressing gratitude for its nourishing embrace. A beautiful reflection of love and longing for the springtime. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:32:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment, and wonderful comment, appreciate, hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/13/2024 5:08:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem and your love affair with spring. Your words were soft but uplifting as was your imagery (the lovely girls in flowered cotton chintz) I love chintz, but it's hard to find these days. The last lines consumed my heart. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:33:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment, and nice comment, I love that line too, hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 4/13/2024 2:15:00 PM

How soul warming is this dear constance! Its so uplifting and so beautifully! And joy of spring can be felt through your well crafted words flowing so seamlessly! Im sure when you are done it will be even more stunning! I love so far “ Putting on my prettiest dress for you, so we will frolic ~ spin ~ twirling, whirling; under the sun . . . under the sky bright blue” just beautiful! Inspired ! Best wishes always

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:34:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the compliment, and wonderful comment, I like those lines too, hugs