Constance La France Poet Sonnet

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Poetry/Sonnet/Oh, Spring My Love
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1635-920-13
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 13, 2024
For the International Contest, Sonnet-Lipogram
Sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 05/15/2024

Fourth Place

Oh, Spring My Love

Oh, Spring my love I feel now your sweet hug,
you send soft breezes to stroke- to entice;
Spring your loving fingers . . . my serene drug,
I longed for you through winters coldest ice.

Putting on my prettiest dress for you,
so we will frolic ~ spin ~ twirling, whirling;
under the sun . . . under the sky bright blue,
even the wildflowers will be swirling.

We will stroll where lovers left their footprints,
oh, they felt hope for their love to flourish;
the lovely girls in flowered cotton chintz, 
I love you Spring for my soul-   you nourish.

Spring, I listen to you whisper to me;
in the night-time  . . .  where I exist with thee.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury May 25, 2024 at 3:38 PM Congratulations on your fabulous win, Dear Constance. Your depiction of the arrival of Spring evokes joy and anticipation. Kudos to you for creating a perfect Sonnet-Lipogram - I am sure this form was not easy! Love and Hugs, Dear Poet~ Constance La France May 29, 2024 at 2:47 PM Mala, thank you for the congratulations, nice comment and compliment, hugs

Tania Kitchin May 15, 2024 at 7:13 PM Constance, wonderfully creative, congratulations on your winning placement. Constance La France May 19, 2024 at 5:20 PM Tania, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, hugs

Emile Pinet May 15, 2024 at 11:31 AM Congratulations Constance! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placement. Although many good poems were submitted, your poem rose to the top ten. Well done, my friend Emile. Constance La France May 19, 2024 at 5:22 PM Emile, thank you for the contest and placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 13, 2024 at 6:13 PM Dear Constance, What a tender ode to the season of renewal and rebirth. Your words are such an expression of the joy and anticipation that comes with the arrival of spring, as nature awakens from its slumber. I loved your imagery of soft breezes, twirling dresses, and whispering nights which evokes a sense of serenity and enchantment. Constance, your deep connection to the season shines through, expressing gratitude for its nourishing embrace. A beautiful reflection of love and longing for the springtime. - Blessings, Daniel Constance La France April 15, 2024 at 5:32 PM Daniel, thank you for the compliment, and wonderful comment, appreciate, hugs

Ink Empress April 13, 2024 at 2:15 PM How soul warming is this dear constance! Its so uplifting and so beautifully! And joy of spring can be felt through your well crafted words flowing so seamlessly! Im sure when you are done it will be even more stunning! I love so far “ Putting on my prettiest dress for you, so we will frolic ~ spin ~ twirling, whirling; under the sun . . . under the sky bright blue” just beautiful! Inspired ! Best wishes always Constance La France April 15, 2024 at 5:34 PM Ink, thank you for the compliment, and wonderful comment, I like those lines too, hugs