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Oh Soul

Revelation chapter 21 He who was seated on the throne said, “I am making everything new!” Then he said, “Write this down, for these words are trustworthy and true.” Oh Soul I pray that you soldier on when the mind and the world, are at war with me Oh Soul I pray you protect me with your cotton ball touch from the hazards of reality Oh Soul Be my rocking chair when I get old and my hair is no longer, beautiful and gold Oh Soul Protect me from all vanity, help me rise above testament of fate and destiny Oh Soul Cross my heart hope to live turn me into Eagle Feather and I promise I will fly Oh Soul, You are my best friend and I will be true to you until the end of time, or forever, whichever happens to be first.

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Sam Scott

Date: 2/10/2024 10:18:00 AM

Dear Rose - I love the prayerful nature of this x delicate lovely poem. This is a cry for all those of us who have or are experiencing that stage of life where we look back more than we want to look forward. Many blessing on your own poetic, mystic journey Sx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/10/2024 10:21:00 AM

Thank you for taking time to reading my poem and leave such a tender encouraging review I am most appreciative :)

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2024 9:19:00 AM

Hello my friend, your poem is a tender reflection on the human condition and the enduring quest for meaning, purpose, and connection. It speaks to the universal longing for guidance, protection, and the assurance of an unwavering presence to accompany us on life's journey.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/10/2024 9:31:00 AM

The human condition can be intricate and complex but the soul is simple, in fact so simple that we often ignore it, thank you for your kind review. :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/10/2024 6:49:00 AM

Dear Mystic Rose poetess, I love the way you crafted this poem and it's deep spiritual perspective. Blessings

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/10/2024 9:31:00 AM

Spirit is always constant in our lives Nancy, we need to wake it up inside and make it part of us everyday, when we get to busy with life, it stays dormant. thanks for reading and commenting. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/10/2024 6:49:00 AM

Oh soul, sweet rose, your words are like a prayer, poetic and captivating and so soul touching, i felt the sincerity of those lines and the flow of your words truly is heartfelt and so touching! I especially loved the lines “ Oh Soul Be my rocking chair when I get old and my hair is not longer, beautiful and gold“ what a powerful write this is! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/10/2024 9:30:00 AM

I receive your light in friendships and love :)

Tom Woody

Date: 2/10/2024 5:55:00 AM

Praying to your soul? That's different. I like your quote of Revelation 21:5. A confirmation that what was just promised in verse 4 will absolutely come true

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/10/2024 9:29:00 AM

The soul is everything, its the most silent part of us but the most powerful, we need to honor it and protect it even from ourselves at times, thanks for reading and commenting Tom