Sandra Haight Poet Limerick

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Oh, Snowman

Oh, snowman, what now did you do?
Your cartwheel has not favored you!
Your feet in the air...
head grounded you stare.
Your upside-down stance is askew!

I built you with such loving care;
to stand like this just isn't fair.
Must take you apart
to build from the start,
and place your head up in the air!

But then, I changed planning...instead,
to make you upright, be ahead...
to top ball moved eyes,
nose, mouth, scarf...surprise!
My snowman with super-sized head!


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: Upside Down World
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged: 01/05/2018

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Robert Johnson January 23, 2018 at 9:22 PM This might not be a proper comment, but snow is water. :) Meaning a big head is called a water head. Told you it was not too proper. Oh well, no harm, no foul. Nice limy.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2018 at 6:13 PM I do like ths snow man poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Sandra Haight January 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM Hi, Darlene. Thank you so much for your visit and positive comment! Much appreciated! :) Sandra

James Inman January 18, 2018 at 6:48 AM I can picture your new snowman in my mind Sandra but I'm not sure that it is any less curious than the original one, lol. Sandra Haight January 18, 2018 at 8:56 AM HaHa...just a bigger head!! Thanks for the visit and reading my poem, James! Sandra

Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 11:06 PM Dropping back with many congrats on your win Sandra:-) I'd love to have seen this place higher. hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett January 7, 2018 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement with your very clever string of limericks Sandra. :))

Viv Wigley January 7, 2018 at 3:16 AM Genius, Sandra, one of my faves. Well done! Viv

Line Gauthier January 6, 2018 at 4:07 PM Delightful, Sandra. Enjoyed your limerick. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2018 at 1:26 PM Very clever, I enjoyed this one Sandra. Congrats on your win. Hugs Rick.

Alexis Y. January 5, 2018 at 10:03 PM Hi Sandra, I enjoyed all three of your limericks. Well done. Congrats on your winning write:-) Alexis

Eve Roper January 5, 2018 at 8:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Sandra, :) enjoyed the Limerick . Hugs Eve ~`*

Manmath Dalei December 26, 2017 at 6:25 PM Beautiful limerick. Enjoyed. Best wishes for the contents....... Hugs Sandra Haight December 29, 2017 at 2:43 PM Thank you so much, Manmath! Sandra

Jan Allison December 26, 2017 at 6:08 PM absolutely charming string of limericks Sandra:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight December 29, 2017 at 2:43 PM Glad you like it, Jan. It was a fun write! Thanks for the nice comments. Hugs, Sandra