Oh, Snap!

I bought a winter coat today;
It didn’t have a tag,
But when I asked the price, it was
A bargain I could snag.

It fit me to a T, although
Another coat in black
Is something that I do not need,
Though I could take it back.

I tried it on again at home;
My husband gave the nod,
Yet in the pocket was a snap,
Which I found rather odd.

My fingers followed all the snaps
To see if one was gone.
Alas, the collar just had half;
No snapping could go on.

Instead, there was a little hole
Where once that snap was sewn,
A defect that decided that
This coat I would not own.

Most likely she who ripped it
Did return it on the sly,
Where it remained for someone
Unsuspecting (me!) to buy.

The next time there’s that little voice
That tells me, “You don’t need it!”
Instead of just ignoring it,
I think I might just heed it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/31/2024 6:52:00 AM
LOL Ilene, very cute poem. Enjoyed it!
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:26:00 PM
thank you, nancy! everyday life always provides a topic for a poem...
Date: 1/31/2024 2:34:00 AM
I’m guessing you were a big “Cheers” fan.
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:25:00 PM
never saw the show, chris! i'm guessing one of the episodes had something to do with this situation, though...
Date: 1/30/2024 9:58:00 PM
This situation happens to almost everyone. I'm not sure is it is likely in the cote hauture line, since I gravitate to affordable. I loved this take on shopping. Anticipating, "what's next?".
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:24:00 PM
thank you, hilda! i only shop affordable as well. i'd be too intimidated to even walk into a fancy expensive clothing store...
Date: 1/30/2024 4:57:00 PM
I can count on you for a rhyme everytime. And a story to boot. It's the stuff books are made of.
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:23:00 PM
thank you for that lovely comment, the situation! (is that the right way to address you? i hope so...)
Date: 1/30/2024 3:41:00 PM
so glad you found the defect - guess it was just a way of telling you to stick with your old faithful coat:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:22:00 PM
you are so right, jan! gotta listen to those signals that the universe sends out. my old coat is perfectly fine...
Date: 1/30/2024 2:31:00 PM
Smashing recount, Ilene. Reminds me that whenever I buy anything that looks like it may have been opened previously, I check thoroughly for missing bits…. There’s always something… once an entire shelf. PEOPLE!!! Terry
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:21:00 PM
thank you, terry! i should have realized that this coat had been worn before because, in addition to the missing snap, it had a slight smell of perfume (which i never wear). i had hoped to overlook that, but it's now back in the store. hopefully, they didn't put it back on the rack to sell again...
Date: 1/30/2024 1:41:00 PM
But it looked so nice...the price a real bargain...and black goes with everything!!:) (Lol Snap! Who am I kidding:)) ~ Thank you for an enjoyable read, Ilene // paul
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:19:00 PM
ha! thank you, paul! in new york city, black is the main clothing color and, you're right - it does go with everything! still, i didn't need a 6th black jacket/coat...
Date: 1/30/2024 12:58:00 PM
I love your poem topics Ilene…everyday stuff you turn into wonderful poems/stories interesting and often with humour. Love this poem but cant stand the sneaky people who do these sly things! Debx
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:17:00 PM
thanks, deb! i love turning my daily experiences into poems if i can. ~ people never cease to surprise me, though mostly it's in ways that are not very nice...
Date: 1/30/2024 12:46:00 PM
-I made many such "bargains" years ago ... we are deceived and tempted, Ilene ... for my part, such purchases are over :))) - hugs
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:16:00 PM
that's a good idea, anne-lise! i am always tempted by a sale and have bought many things over the years i could easily have done without...
Date: 1/30/2024 12:40:00 PM
I often read your poems and admire the simplicity of your subject, but written with great imagery.
Login to Reply
Bauer Avatar
Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/31/2024 4:15:00 PM
thank you so much, victor! i appreciate that...
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad