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Oh, Savage Wind

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Oh, wild fierce wind, howling and whirling and twisting; you are the biggest fear in my mind, since a child my dread persisting. I hate your whistling and your roaring zephyr screams, you shake my windows until they will break it seems; I flinch when you throw your lightning beams, so, in my closet- that's where me . . . you will find. ______________________________ May 30, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Oh, Savage Wind Copyright Protected, ID 19-1147-954-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, What Makes You Flinch sponsor, Julie Leigh Rodenheaver Honorable Mention

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2019 10:09:00 PM

Clenching my eyes as I read and imagine the wild wind ripping at your home. Congratulations, Constance!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2019 8:07:00 AM

There are strong winds here, often. I can relate to this. Well written :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:54:00 PM

Heidi, I live in a windy place, gosh sometimes I think why do I stay ??? Thanks for visiting

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/31/2019 7:56:00 AM

Yes. Wind scares me till date. That feeling is beautifully captured in your words. :)

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:54:00 PM

Swetha, I have always and forever hated the wind ~

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/31/2019 12:29:00 AM

Dear Heart, Very nice poem. I remember being scared like this,..scared of the winds and storm, it was only a moment ago. -Richard

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:52:00 PM

Richard, thanks for visiting, I have always been afraid of the strong winds, a shrink would have fun looking instead my swirling head !

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/30/2019 10:56:00 PM

Hello Dear Heart … your verse is all about our past four days. Swirling, moaning, driving rain, and really cold - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:51:00 PM

Hello Lindsay, thanks for the visit, I guess I am not alone with this wind thing ~

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/30/2019 6:33:00 PM

Were it not for the wind in your lungs, you would be safe from everything … Aloha! Rico

Constance La France
Date: 6/2/2019 5:50:00 PM

Rico, there is a lovely breeze and then there is WIND, thanks for visiting ~