Oh Sara Lynn...

Oh Sara Lynn...Why should I even try and go on?
       Many nights I sit on this hill and cry since you been gone.
Oh Sara Lynn...Your departure I try desperately to analize.
       Well into the night I wander even as I watch the sunrise.
Oh Sara Lynn....I lay back on this hill where we first made love 
       From that day forward your body I could never get enough of.
Oh Sara Lynn...I can still taste you on the tip of my tongue,
       And the sweet smell of you still lingers in my lung.
Oh Sara Lynn...My lovely sweet Sara Lynn,
       How I wish we could go back and do it all over again.
Oh Sara Lynn...The yearning in my heart is so hard to ignore,
       And it constantly tears me apart when I think about your move to Baltimore.
Oh Sara Lynn...I pray you'll return to me real soon;
       So we may continue our passionate intimacies on this hill under the full moon!

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Date: 3/4/2010 2:41:00 PM
Jimmy this poem should be the Winners..its very very good,Mr Snowman,Im impressed,lol..:) Charma
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:41:00 PM
to my chest of favz..Charma
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:37:00 PM
Hey, this was an interesting way to do the contest. Good one, Jimmy , and if I look on facebook, do I type in just your name or that number with it? Luv,Andrea
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:07:00 PM
:) Another good write and a good entry in Matt's contest, but I thought....oh, I'll write. I think you've already submitted one, though.LOL! I wish you good luck in Matt's contest, love, Peanut butter
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