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Jan. 25. 2025
4x  4x 4x Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Miranda Hawley
~Placed First~

 

Oh, lovely Rose flower, Blooming in scarlet color, You are beauty born. A child of dawn. With nudge of breeze, Sweet aroma you release. It enters our nose A whispered promise. You are so divine In any garden, shine Among flowers you reign, As an unrivalled queen. When velvety petals unfold What beauty you enfold. With bewitching smile sweet, Everyone, you warmly greet.

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Date: 2/2/2025 4:37:00 AM
beautiful dear poet friend. will be back to congratulate - lovely rose...
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Date: 2/1/2025 7:45:00 PM
Congrats, Valsa!
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Date: 2/1/2025 3:03:00 PM
"Sweet aroma you release." What a true and great line. "In any garden, shine." This is just colorful and nice. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 1/31/2025 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 1/31/2025 3:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 1/31/2025 2:03:00 AM
great poem unrestricted by the constraints of 4x4x4x4, congratulations
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Date: 1/29/2025 12:31:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Valsa :) - What could be more beautiful than a newly-sprouted rose :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/26/2025 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Enjoy yourvacation.
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Date: 1/26/2025 8:40:00 AM
4x4x4x4 Not easy as it seems. Your imagery is so exciting to read. Loved the red rose.
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Date: 1/26/2025 4:50:00 AM
I like this one. Great rhyming and rhythm. Thanks for sharing. Aren't those roses sweet. Sara K
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Date: 1/25/2025 3:30:00 PM
this packs a sundry of a verse, valsa ...beautifully structured with simple lines! Love it!
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Date: 1/25/2025 11:10:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you have created a stunning poem that celebrates the beauty and elegance of the rose, portraying it as a symbol of purity, charm, and perfection in nature. It emphasizes the rose's charm and unique place among flowers. Your poetry uses colorful and detailed language. Words like "lovely," "scarlet," "blooming," and "velvety" accurately describe the rose's beauty and charm. Sensory language, notably with "sweet aroma" and "whispered promise," creates a powerful olfactory image and emotional involvement.
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Date: 1/25/2025 8:00:00 AM
A lovely write, Valsa!
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Date: 1/25/2025 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful photo and poem to go with it.
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Date: 1/25/2025 6:17:00 AM
Gorgeous photo and poem to go with it. Flowers are truly a gift from a benevolent Creator, along with the senses we have been given to appreciate them fully
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