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Jan. 25. 2025

4x 4x 4x Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Miranda Hawley

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Oh, Rose Flower

Oh, lovely Rose flower,
Blooming in scarlet color,
You are beauty born.
A child of dawn.

With nudge of breeze,
Sweet aroma you release.
It enters our nose 
A whispered promise.

You are so divine
In any garden, shine
Among flowers you reign, 
As an unrivalled queen.

When velvety petals unfold
What beauty you enfold.
With bewitching smile sweet,
Everyone, you warmly greet.

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thriveni c mysore

February 2, 2025 at 4:37 AM

beautiful dear poet friend. will be back to congratulate - lovely rose...

Kim Rodrigues

February 1, 2025 at 7:45 PM

Congrats, Valsa!

Miranda Hawley

February 1, 2025 at 3:03 PM

"Sweet aroma you release." What a true and great line. "In any garden, shine." This is just colorful and nice. Congrats on your win in my contest.

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2025 at 1:03 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2025 at 3:01 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa :) - hugs

Terry Miller

January 31, 2025 at 2:03 AM

great poem unrestricted by the constraints of 4x4x4x4, congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 29, 2025 at 12:31 PM

- Beautiful written, Valsa :) - What could be more beautiful than a newly-sprouted rose :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jay Narain

January 26, 2025 at 9:38 AM

Beautiful poem. Enjoy yourvacation.

Victor Buhagiar

January 26, 2025 at 8:40 AM

4x4x4x4 Not easy as it seems. Your imagery is so exciting to read. Loved the red rose.

Sara Kendrick

January 26, 2025 at 4:50 AM

I like this one. Great rhyming and rhythm. Thanks for sharing. Aren't those roses sweet. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

January 25, 2025 at 3:30 PM

this packs a sundry of a verse, valsa ...beautifully structured with simple lines! Love it!

Sotto Poet

January 25, 2025 at 11:10 AM

Dear Valsa, you have created a stunning poem that celebrates the beauty and elegance of the rose, portraying it as a symbol of purity, charm, and perfection in nature. It emphasizes the rose's charm and unique place among flowers. Your poetry uses colorful and detailed language. Words like "lovely," "scarlet," "blooming," and "velvety" accurately describe the rose's beauty and charm. Sensory language, notably with "sweet aroma" and "whispered promise," creates a powerful olfactory image and emotional involvement.