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Oh Pooh

I arrive at work,  need the loo
Bowl’s splattered with gloopy brown poo
Can’t folk use the brush
Just after they flush
It’s something that I’d always do!

*happened at work this morning 


01/13/22

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2022 at 12:57 PM - Some just do not care ... they driter(Norwegian word:) in it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 16, 2022 at 5:50 AM Jan, there should be 3 toilets, one for the women's, one for the men's and one for the disrespectful. I just wish I had read this before I ate my bacon & egg sandwich...lol Hugs, Charlie xx

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2022 at 1:35 AM Hi Jan, a bad reflection of a person's character, perfectly poetically described. Hugs and Blessings. Hope the New Year brings to fruition whatever your heart desires. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta January 14, 2022 at 10:10 AM Ditto, Terry! Aloha!

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2022 at 4:46 AM Oh no, some people are no better than animals, they probably got a kick out of leaving it in that state. Tom

Terry Flood January 13, 2022 at 4:59 PM Reckon you went in the gents. Ha ha. Fun, if grizzly, write, Jan. Terry

David Kavanagh January 13, 2022 at 2:58 PM Heya Jan Some dirty swine shat your work toilet loo, and never cleaned it with the brush provided, id say you where guessing all day whom it was, how many you narrow it down to lol, this is brilliant cheers David

Ronald D Thompson January 13, 2022 at 2:39 PM Stuff of nightmares Jan!! Great poem. Best...Ron x

L Milton Hankins January 13, 2022 at 2:25 PM Nothing more disgusting, I think, than a dirty commode, especially when it's so easy to keep it presentable! Good one, Jan.

Robert Gorelick January 13, 2022 at 1:36 PM Poor you! Jan it's happens in the UK too?

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2022 at 1:24 PM so gross to see that. many places in public don't have brushes, jan, at least not in American public toilets.

Ilene Bauer January 13, 2022 at 1:05 PM ugh! that isn't nice! i've never heard of a workplace that had a brush, though - you're more advanced than we are in the states. great job, as always, jan! Jan Allison January 13, 2022 at 1:20 PM It' was horrid Ilene especially as there are brushes by the loo so there is no excuse not to give it a clean , hugs Jan xx