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I arrive at work, need the loo Bowl’s splattered with gloopy brown poo Can’t folk use the brush Just after they flush It’s something that I’d always do! *happened at work this morning 01/13/22

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2022 12:57:00 PM

- Some just do not care ... they driter(Norwegian word:) in it, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2022 5:50:00 AM

Jan, there should be 3 toilets, one for the women's, one for the men's and one for the disrespectful. I just wish I had read this before I ate my bacon & egg sandwich...lol Hugs, Charlie xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2022 1:35:00 AM

Hi Jan, a bad reflection of a person's character, perfectly poetically described. Hugs and Blessings. Hope the New Year brings to fruition whatever your heart desires. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/14/2022 10:10:00 AM

Ditto, Terry! Aloha!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2022 4:46:00 AM

Oh no, some people are no better than animals, they probably got a kick out of leaving it in that state. Tom

Terry Flood

Date: 1/13/2022 4:59:00 PM

Reckon you went in the gents. Ha ha. Fun, if grizzly, write, Jan. Terry

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/13/2022 2:58:00 PM

Heya Jan Some dirty swine shat your work toilet loo, and never cleaned it with the brush provided, id say you where guessing all day whom it was, how many you narrow it down to lol, this is brilliant cheers David

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/13/2022 2:39:00 PM

Stuff of nightmares Jan!! Great poem. Best...Ron x

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/13/2022 2:25:00 PM

Nothing more disgusting, I think, than a dirty commode, especially when it's so easy to keep it presentable! Good one, Jan.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 1/13/2022 1:36:00 PM

Poor you! Jan it's happens in the UK too?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2022 1:24:00 PM

so gross to see that. many places in public don't have brushes, jan, at least not in American public toilets.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/13/2022 1:05:00 PM

ugh! that isn't nice! i've never heard of a workplace that had a brush, though - you're more advanced than we are in the states. great job, as always, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2022 1:20:00 PM

It' was horrid Ilene especially as there are brushes by the loo so there is no excuse not to give it a clean , hugs Jan xx