Oh, No, She's Stopping Now. (Song To a Rock and Roll Beat)

I heard drums kick in. Now I hear that music. Wait, What's THAT?!
(Sung to HELLO, I LOVE YOU by the Doors.)

Oh, yeah, she's swaying, so get out of her way.
Oh, no, she's stopping now, she's looking my way.
Oh, yeah, sashaying and she won't be defied.
Oh, no, a goddess who just won't be denied.

She's drops her glasses low
Just to watch me sizzle slow.
She coos just like a dove.
The panther purrs steamy summer love.

Oh, yeah, she's swaying, so get out of her way.
Oh, no, she's stopping now, she's looking my way.
Oh, yeah, sashaying and she won't be defied.
Oh, no, a goddess and she won't be denied.

Her curves turn tight and free.
A brand new form of geometry.
Her eyes like lasers, melting men into mush
When she styles, she gives me such a rush.

Why Am I Bending To Those Strings?!

She bobs her head and her luscious mane.
Now she’s off to tease in a faster lane.
Do you want to see her coyly smile?
If she gave an inch, would you run a mile?

Oh, yeah! Oh No! 
Oh, Yeah! Oh, No! Oh yeah! Oh, No! (Repeat and fade out :)

And underneath it all is heard:

She’s fine. Divine. She’s all that a man would crawl for.
 My mommas warning me…Rock, yeah
Go on, baby, I’m yours, you’re mine… Yeah…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/19/2010 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on 7th place win, Gerard
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:45:00 PM
This one was so cute. It really deserved to be on the list. LUv, Andrea ps. congratulations of course!
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congrats Gerard on your success in my contest on Steamy Summer Love.. with this amazing and awesome write.. thankxxx for always supporting my contests.. my new one will be posted today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 8:21:00 PM
gerard, who got mad at you? Were they mad that you said "textbook" to ME or to something THEY wrote? In any event, I am not offended. that poem of mine was purely "intellectually" written. It was not a poem of the "heart" Many of my poems are not heartfelt. I do both kinds and I understand completely what you were saying! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2010 7:15:00 AM
Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Gerard. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:24:00 AM
Be sure to check out John Freeman's Limericks contest, Gerard. Five more spots left open for political humor. Just a heads up to a great limerick writer! Soup mail returned. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/14/2010 9:42:00 PM
I like that Doors song and I could hear the melody and the words fit it very well. I think Linda could very well like this one alot. Very clever!! And some great imagery in this one, Gerard! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:22:00 PM
Soup mail in a moment!
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Date: 7/14/2010 1:02:00 PM
Not familiar with the song but good write that is passionate...Let the gifted brain keep on working...Sara
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:55:00 PM
Wow, that was fun to sing along, Gerard! I like your lyrics better than the original ones. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:37:00 PM
Hello Gerard K.Jr.I really enjoy reading your love song here, wow! is really the comments, I want to place. Well as long as the heart is all pured out in this lyric you should do well to impress her..I alway brag how i love your poetry. LOL, out of the many poems i have enjoyed of yours ,I especially think this is your most popular ones. Most of the comments i leave on your poetry are given by feeling that you are a kickass poet just wanting to point your awesome talent. WOW!!,..p.d.
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