Oh My Love

Questing over my litting ham Tasting the sweet deep cold thunders Still can I give my body's juices In pure love When many fly without a thought While the tears rive my taunted cheeks I know a salty and selfless love No man has ever bought Nor can ever earn...

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/6/2018 9:19:00 PM

Awesome poem -JT

Messoh Vincent

Date: 7/21/2016 1:40:00 PM

What a deep and explosive read this was... packed with pleasant tension looking for a fault line through which to vent out. It has been so interesting reading this my dear.

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/5/2015 11:49:00 AM

if given the proper chance....I know one who lives romance....whose heart is always true....who can tame nearly any shrew....lol

Connie Tabi
Date: 8/6/2015 9:59:00 AM

Thank You Eric.....

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 1:41:00 AM

Connie, this is deep.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight **SKAT**

Connie Tabi
Date: 7/3/2015 9:12:00 AM

Je vous remercie beaucoup et je vous remercie pour votre visite to my page. Glad u liked it. Ta...... Connie.....