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Oh My God

lush her cathedral
  barefoot walking in the woods~

           sacred communion 




7/15/2020


A Contest about a Goddess or a God - not THE God
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Kimberly Sikorski

Date: 2/22/2021 9:13:00 AM

Truly inspired ! I am a “barefoot walker” as well Maureen ! Too many wars have been fought in Gods name over religion...Kim

Phred Sirikye

Date: 8/17/2020 7:12:00 PM

Oh my God. This is a fav for me.. I am gonna try haiku. I have got my inspiration today. Blessing, Phred

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/4/2020 7:20:00 AM

Omg..,I missed your POTD. Belated KUDOs, my friend Panagiota xx. ..,Pangie

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/4/2020 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Pangie! xo Pidge ;),

Literary Waves

Date: 7/30/2020 10:40:00 AM

powerful image

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/4/2020 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Dido! xomo

John Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2020 9:09:00 AM

I have to be honest Mo, I'm not a lover of short writes, almost never do I read a Haiku, much less write one, I always thought you need more words to make the point clear....but...this one changed my mind forever...so succinct but sublime this is a fave to recall to mind the majesty of a haiku, congrats on POTD

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/27/2020 9:59:00 AM

I know that of you, which makes your generous appreciation of my little poem all the more heart warming. You have made my day John, thank you! xomo

Indiana Shaw

Date: 7/23/2020 6:23:00 PM

Surely an un-beatable lass, on the images that you cast . . . : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/24/2020 3:31:00 AM

Thank you Lovely <3<3<3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2020 4:00:00 AM

Congrats on POTD!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/23/2020 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Kim! Hugs :))) xomo

Paul Callus

Date: 7/22/2020 1:44:00 PM

Beautiful, Mo! The divinity of green open spaces!! Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/23/2020 5:52:00 AM

Thank you Paul! Warm hugs, xomo

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/19/2020 10:17:00 AM

such a beautiful and simple haiku. congrats on your POTD.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/19/2020 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne! Hugs :) mo

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/18/2020 11:35:00 AM

Earth to Sole or Sole to Earth...Congratulations Maureen on POTD...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 12:07:00 PM

I am a sole sister ;), Thank you Arturo, hugs! xomo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/18/2020 10:53:00 AM

Excellent write - congratulations on POTD - very well deserved. Blessings, Jennifer.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer :))) mo hugs! xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/18/2020 8:41:00 AM

Love it and a belated congratulations on POTD.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Tania! Mo Hugs! ~x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/18/2020 2:32:00 AM

Congrats on POTD my friend! Wow! Love it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Lovely! Now forget you ever saw it ;), xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2020 9:08:00 PM

ahhh, a POTD. I can see why!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 9:26:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! We all need to dip our toes in the woods, it is most grounding. PEMFs et al ;), xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/17/2020 7:12:00 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations on POTD

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Eve! Mo hugs ~x

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/17/2020 7:10:00 PM

"lush her cathedral" Such a breathtaking image. The entire poem holds so much beauty. Congratulations Maureen, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/18/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Brandy! It is a beautiful park, thankfully I’m in a capital city, where in keeping it pretty the green spaces are treasured. xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2020 5:18:00 PM

Ooh! You did it! -- without (!) the darkness of Nathaniel Hawthorne!* Congrats on POTD, Mo! Way to go! :) Gershon *I'm thinking of 'Young Goodman Brown' where the woods are a veritable cathedral of darkness and evil. ~ gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 6:07:00 PM

No devils in my woods; save the gypsy moth caterpillars and the litter bugs, well, and the mosquitoes ;), Thank you my friend, mo hugs! ~x

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/17/2020 3:57:00 PM

To be at peace - to be at one - is life fulfilled. Seventeen syllables rich in texture, imagery and meter. A fav for me, Maureen. Congratulations on you POTD. Blessings!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Sam! Mo hugs :))) xomo!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/17/2020 3:47:00 PM

What a beautiful choice for Poem of the day! I love the serenity this haiku contains. Congratulations on your most deserving honor Mo. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 5:48:00 PM

Thank you Connie! I can tell you, if I am not walking with serenity, I WILL step in poop ;D, Mo hugs! ~x

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/17/2020 3:05:00 PM

Back to congratulate you my dearest, Maureen. I knew it was POTD material thus I was the first to favorite it. Hugs xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 5:42:00 PM

Thank you my dear! I love it when poem I faved gets picked too <3 Big hugs! xomo ~x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/17/2020 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. I went to a small church in the wood once. It was beautiful like your poem. Enjoy your win and day...........

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Paula! :), xomo

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/17/2020 12:30:00 PM

Filled with inner and outer beauty! Congrats on POTD ~ well deserved :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 1:19:00 PM

Thank you PM! mo hugs! ~x

John Lawless

Date: 7/17/2020 12:26:00 PM

Now that's a cathedral I could be comfortable in....beautifully written

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 1:18:00 PM

Thank you John. It was too wet for barefoot today, but the sun made an appearance and its light trickled through the canopy like stained glass. xomo

John Watt

Date: 7/17/2020 12:13:00 PM

Ah, my tart pigeon poetess, you have penned a nature masterpiece in only 10 words. This beauty is worthy of the POTD honor, wear the banner with pride today, my friend. Congratulations, and best wishes in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/17/2020 1:15:00 PM

Thank you so much John! <3