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Oh, My Garden

Oh, my garden! Pretty growing, the sweet purple pansies tumbling; painted petals just so lovely. All my flowers like it sunny, and green nasturtium are creeping. White winged sweet pea tendrils twisting, orange butterfly weed sprawling; golden bees drift- yellow fuzzy. Oh, my garden! Charming lady's mantle swaying, sage, oregano, thyme falling; thistle all blue and powdery, yarrow- a delicate beauty. I love all my flowers thriving. Oh, my garden! _______________________ October 16, 2017 Poetry/Rondeau/Oh, My Garden Copyright Protected, ID 17-9501-75-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Rondeau Poem sponsor, Laura Loo First Place
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Beaufort Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 7:49 PM
You must really enjoy it. A very complementary and sweet piece about the different plants and bees. We struggle growing a fig tree and manage to get a little fruit each year. Nothing at all and much better than what is available through retail.
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 7:49 PM
So much fun! you have revealed great joy you share with us all, Constance, thank you! ...we have had a late, warm fall here in Minnesota...still pulling Nasturtium blossoms & leaves from my garden, I like 'im with scrambled eggs!
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:55 PM
So well written--beautiful imagery--best for a win, BW!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:21 PM
I love your garden! Nasturtiums especially :) Wonderful Rondeau, good luck in the contest xomo!
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