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"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" Quote By _ Rumi The day I found love I do not regret _ It was in the Spring when the flowers bloom And then, like a sweet dream you were my groom It was our life destiny that we met: Those romantic days I will not forget, Oh, I can still smell your scent in our room And yes, we were planning a baby boom Still recall us walking- as the sunset. Now, in my dreams I call for you in vain, God had a plan my love so up you flew: My heart is shattered and I am in pain, but still feel you in the night and morn' dew, Though dark death has taken you up above, You will forever be my one true love. _______________ July 18, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Dante Sonnet/Oh, My Beloved Copyright Protected, iD 07-1474-500-18 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Body of poem is 124 words verified on PS Word Counter Rhyming verified on Rhymezone.com abbaabba cdcdee Syllables 10 per line, verified on HowManySyllables.com Written in the Rhyming Sonnet style of Dante Gabriele Rossette Written for the Premiere contest, Rhyme Rumi Quote sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 08/12/2022 First Place

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L. J. Carber

Date: 8/18/2022 8:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Constance--and you will be with him again sometime--as my mother told me on her death bed, 'Love never goes away'....

Constance La France
Date: 8/18/2022 9:16:00 AM

LJ, thank you so much for the congrats and the comment ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2022 4:19:00 AM

Sad one but a great winning entry. Way to go. Congratulations. Your rhythm, rhyme and flow are excellent. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 8/16/2022 9:51:00 AM

Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2022 11:30:00 AM

but still feel you in the night and morn' dew…poignant and true of true love lost to death. Congratulations, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2022 1:56:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/14/2022 8:08:00 PM

Are you sure you are not La Persian? Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2022 1:57:00 PM

Pashang, thank you so much for the humour and the congratulations, no it is La France for sure, blessings ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2022 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. What an ending. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Constance La France
Date: 8/14/2022 2:49:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance

Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 9:52:00 PM

Knowing how much you suffered in life with the series of deaths that have occurred in your family, this poem tugs at my heartstrings ! Yet, like a phoenix you have risen from the ashes and have made poetry your mainstay ! Congratulations dear Constance for the beautiful and moving poems you write, mostly with some personal element in them ! Congratulations on your great win !

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2022 1:15:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment, compliment and the congratulations, yes, it is true I put a lot of me in my poetry, blessings ~Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 9:50:00 PM

Your poignant poem is written beautifully Constance. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2022 1:17:00 AM

Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/12/2022 8:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this mesmerising piece. A fav for me. ^___^JCB

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2022 1:20:00 AM

JCB, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment and the FAV, blessings ~Constance

Thompson Emate

Date: 8/12/2022 7:53:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Constance. I love the rhyme scheme. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2022 1:24:00 AM

Thompson, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/18/2022 5:20:00 PM

This is beautifully written, Constance. I hope you will re-classify it as the sonnet it is after the contest. We don't see that rhyme scheme very often. I loved it.

Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2022 6:37:00 PM

Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, I will change the form after the contest is judged, I love the rhyme scheme too, blessings ~ Constance