James Peranteau Poet Romanticism

Oh Lover

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       May i kiss you softly
          ‘pon  thine flesh
           with aspiration
         of condoning gest'

               Pillow me
                bed me
      request from this soul
       what force will cause 
           yourn agitation

       I am your tenacious
                   yes
             determined
                   tool

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Amy Green April 3, 2014 at 3:53 AM Time for a cold shower- YOW!

Debbie Duncan July 16, 2012 at 3:36 PM a little romance here I see ;} I posted A Lover's Quarrel .

Dalila Agtani August 12, 2011 at 3:22 AM Subtle expression of words to a lover! Nice poem. Thank you for reading my poem. Dalila

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM What a romantic poem James. Simply beautiful....Thanks so much for sharing.. and thanks for your kind comments!!!!!!

Sean L Sanders August 3, 2011 at 6:42 AM See this is why I read poetry. Very giving in emotions.

Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2011 at 12:13 AM James, how can i smile not.. pillow me! how sweet my other always says what a great foot rest is one... lol... way off the subject. how ever, your poem is very intriguing and you know what gracious way it will move one.. thank s for sharing,..p.d. James Peranteau August 4, 2023 at 11:17 PM i owe you the thank you ;) much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire August 1, 2011 at 3:51 PM Thanks for your kind words, James. I'm still waiting for "your gracious moves." Love you, Carolyn

Joseph Osita August 1, 2011 at 1:38 PM An amazing romantic piece. Very beautiful

Nette Onclaud August 1, 2011 at 11:13 AM whoo, this makes me sing a fave song of my dad.." i'm in the mood for love.."... romance drips, james! enticing write! :) hugg, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 30, 2011 at 6:48 PM well guess I should have waited to read this one in an AC room instead of on hot beach deeming me in hotter state of mind.. fantastic words James... luv the ebb and flow and determined tool line.. now perhaps u will find my "Cravings" a bit more suitable to compliment this delight..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire July 30, 2011 at 2:19 PM Wow, now I'm in the mood for love, James! Where can I find a man like you who "illuminates" with "gracious moves." Love this poem and the poet as well. Carolyn

Steven Cooke July 30, 2011 at 1:07 PM very amorous, love the subject matter. good poem