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Oh Lover

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       May i kiss you softly
          ‘pon  thine flesh
           with aspiration
         of condoning gest'

               Pillow me
                bed me
      request from this soul
       what force will cause 
           yourn agitation

       I am your tenacious
                   yes
             determined
                   tool

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Amy Green

Date: 4/3/2014 3:53:00 AM

Time for a cold shower- YOW!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/16/2012 3:36:00 PM

a little romance here I see ;} I posted A Lover's Quarrel .

Dalila Agtani

Date: 8/12/2011 3:22:00 AM

Subtle expression of words to a lover! Nice poem. Thank you for reading my poem. Dalila

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/5/2011 10:11:00 AM

What a romantic poem James. Simply beautiful....Thanks so much for sharing.. and thanks for your kind comments!!!!!!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/3/2011 6:42:00 AM

See this is why I read poetry. Very giving in emotions.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/3/2011 12:13:00 AM

James, how can i smile not.. pillow me! how sweet my other always says what a great foot rest is one... lol... way off the subject. how ever, your poem is very intriguing and you know what gracious way it will move one.. thank s for sharing,..p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 8/4/2023 11:17:00 PM

i owe you the thank you ;) much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/1/2011 3:51:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, James. I'm still waiting for "your gracious moves." Love you, Carolyn

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/1/2011 1:38:00 PM

An amazing romantic piece. Very beautiful

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/1/2011 11:13:00 AM

whoo, this makes me sing a fave song of my dad.." i'm in the mood for love.."... romance drips, james! enticing write! :) hugg, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2011 6:48:00 PM

well guess I should have waited to read this one in an AC room instead of on hot beach deeming me in hotter state of mind.. fantastic words James... luv the ebb and flow and determined tool line.. now perhaps u will find my "Cravings" a bit more suitable to compliment this delight..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/30/2011 2:19:00 PM

Wow, now I'm in the mood for love, James! Where can I find a man like you who "illuminates" with "gracious moves." Love this poem and the poet as well. Carolyn