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Written August 19, 2023 
(revised from former version- 04/23/2019)
For Premiere Contest, “Pantoum”
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

Oh, Lord- I'm thankful for this day- though just a day like all the rest. I simply woke and ate today; kept warm and dry, in comfort dressed. Though just a day, like all the rest, I worked and played, then soundly slept. Kept warm and dry, in comfort, dressed. I saw and heard, ran, walked, and stepped. I worked and played, then soundly slept. I tasted, smelled, and keenly felt. I saw and heard, ran, walked and stepped; with my concerns, I calmly dealt. I tasted, smelled, and keenly felt. I loved- was loved back in return. With my concerns, I calmly dealt; a plain old day to start, adjourn. I loved- was loved back in return. Forgive me, Lord, you've spoiled me! A plain old day to start, adjourn? Oh, how ungrateful can I be? Forgive me, Lord, you've spoiled me. Your miracle of life I hold. Oh, how ungrateful can I be? You've blessed me with your gifts untold! Your miracle of life I hold! I simply woke and ate today? You've blessed me with your gifts untold. Oh, Lord- I'm thankful for this day!!

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Date: 9/15/2023 5:27:00 PM
Dear Sandra, your pantoum is beautifully praiseful and filled with gratitude. Your golden verses shine! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:52:00 AM
Oh, Lord - I, too, am thankful for this day... Such a blessed and beautiful writing, a poem, a psalm. Filled with tenderness that betrays your heart and soul, your kindness and the glow that I know must impress everyone you know. God bless you and Congrats on top win in this contest. Love, Gina
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/13/2023 11:32:00 AM
Dear Gina, thank you so much for loving my poem and for my wonderful placement and congrats. Your supportive and very uplifting comments are much appreciated and I cherish them as special gifts. Thank you again. Hugs, Sandra

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