George Seal Poet Senryu

Oh Leafy Glade

gently touching hands
    strolling barefoot by a stream
    a timeless romance 

    And the grass won't pay no mind.
    Written and performed by Neil Diamond.

    9 / 2 / 2019.

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James Inman October 5, 2019 at 9:58 AM I haven't heard this one for a long time. You capture the sentiment of the song well.

Constance La France October 3, 2019 at 5:13 PM George congratulations on your win in the contest!

Line Gauthier October 3, 2019 at 4:26 PM Lovely, George. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus October 3, 2019 at 2:37 PM Yours is a lovely romantic senryu, George...and Neil's voice is superb. Congratulations on a fine win. Regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee October 3, 2019 at 2:19 PM My heart soared with the thought of this lovers tryst. Congrats!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 3, 2019 at 9:34 AM Sublime lines. Congratulations on your win George. xomo