Oh Hum

I just Sit and wait That way I won't Be late.

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/19/2010 1:53:00 PM

There are times when it's better to be late than never. Congratulations on being featured! Great job! Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2010 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured on home page this week...Leaves the reader with many questions...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/19/2010 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cile. Love, Carol

Jod!E Quintero

Date: 6/17/2010 3:46:00 PM

so cute..love this : ) -Jodie Q

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/16/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congrats in this wonderful verse being featured this week. I especially like the title, to me, it is the backbone of the writing. Caryl

Janette Fisher

Date: 6/14/2010 1:14:00 PM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/14/2010 12:54:00 PM

This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/13/2010 7:16:00 PM

Congrats Cile on "Oh Hum" being featured. Vince

Date: 6/13/2010 6:40:00 PM

Like the lighthearted feel of this one. Fitting title. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing!!! I have missed you here at The Soup. I hope life is treating you kindly. Karen