Eileen Manassian Poet Monorhyme

Oh How You Play Me

Oh how you play me
Sway me
Love to slay me
You game of prey me

Oh how you entice me
Spice me
Naughty and nice me
Heart on ice me

Oh how you move me
Groove me
Smile of approve me
How you behoove me

Oh how you thrill me
Kill me
Fantasy quill me
How you love fill me

Oh how you tame me
Game me
Passion bright flame me
Oh how you blame me

Oh how you tease me
Pleases me
Love and release me
How you caprice me

Oh how you taste me
Lace me
You love to race me
How you unchaste me

Oh how you draw me
Thaw me
You love to awe me
Oh how you flaw me

Oh…oh how you play me!!!

Eileen Manassian

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Karl Marszalowicz August 28, 2014 at 1:21 PM are you sure this isn't lyrical? It seems to have the same tempo a song might have. Still enjoyable though- good piece Eileen Manassian August 28, 2014 at 1:29 PM I appreciate this insight, Karl. I will change the category to lyric. I never thought I could write lyrical pieces. Thanks for the input.

Richard Lamoureux August 22, 2014 at 8:20 AM I do not think he will be able to tame you. If he try's he is a fool and does not deserve you. This was passionate and fun Eileen. Eileen Manassian August 22, 2014 at 8:37 AM :) Thank you for saying that, Richard. Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad to have your vote of confidence on my work.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 20, 2014 at 9:32 AM Mind blowing Eileen! Ur write is magnetic dear friend! Eileen Manassian August 21, 2014 at 3:22 AM DR UPMA... :) :) :)...There is your pretty avatar come to say hello! HUGS to you from my heart!

Justin Bordner August 20, 2014 at 1:23 AM Oh how you ravish me, ripen me, take the rules right out of me...I could not resist to play rhyme and romance with you Eileen. You've got one special Muse to write a masterpiece like this for! Every verse is so tight and right, and the reps of Me are a delight. This is an awesome ride and write, and another FAV. Eileen...J.A.B. Eileen Manassian August 20, 2014 at 3:11 AM :) JUSTIN!!!!! Hello! :) You like this piece...I'm glad. It's a little different, but different is good sometimes. Sometimes playing games can be fun...I know the rules, and I can break them! It's all about the win, Justin. To win a heart...can there be a greater thrill? I don't think so. Glad you took time to play! :)

Charmaine Chircop August 19, 2014 at 7:01 PM Oh how you draw us to your poetry sweet Eileen with that sweet desire and certain words which makes me ponder.May He plays with you and not play you..cause your heart deserves the best. Eileen Manassian August 20, 2014 at 3:07 AM Thank you, Charmaine...Playing can be fun, but playing someone...NOT! Life is a game...Lovely to have someone on my side. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2014 at 5:33 PM love all those monorhymes that are coming in front of Me word. It's a great sound!! A cleverly formatted poem.

Casarah Nance August 19, 2014 at 5:16 PM Oh sweetie, this must be a lusting kind of Tuesday, there is so much fire in the soup! I love this, this is the kind of poetry that gets my heart pumping! That line--fantasy quill me-- amazing, you always inspire me! :) You rock! Eileen Manassian August 20, 2014 at 3:06 AM Fire warms the heart, my dear. Glad you like it...It is a new kind for me...I'm usually old school sort of gal, but what the hey...now and then, a change is good! Hugs!!!

Tim Smith August 19, 2014 at 3:11 PM Oh how your words get to me...deep inside of me...not releasing me...tantalizing me....oh how I long for you with me...our fantasy...beautiful Eileen....love the power and raw emotion...hugs Tim Eileen Manassian August 19, 2014 at 3:15 PM Tim...I see this write inspired you! If I could tuck away a post and savor it on a rainy day...this would be it, my dear. Sunshine to my heart! You are a good man, Tim. Thank you for visiting...and for calling me beautiful. You don't know how much I need that right now. Hugs....

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2014 at 2:03 PM - A play with fire ..... dangerous !!! - Lovely written dear friend!!! - - - Reply from my footle - my name is not: Andrea Footle !!! Me blond,yes !!! ...you have to read it again, my dear friend Eileen :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian August 19, 2014 at 2:14 PM I did, my sweet Sunshine! My brain is fried! SO Sorry! It is a lovely footle! Good luck on the contest! Hugs