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Oh, Hello September

 
I want to be lost in a sea of rainbow leaves as the drum of time rolls and September is here and Summer is a shadow on the wall of time today clouds sail across a blue azure sky though some clouds are still and powder puff beautiful but sadly my garden in the stillness is decaying and fading, fading each day with whispers of farewell for the nights are cool and crisp oh, hello September, I welcome your breezy ways and the leaves that will fall and float, spin and twirl it is time for pumpkin pies and roasted chestnuts cuddly sweaters and lighting a crackling fire and making fat apple pies like grandma used to bake and going for walks to enjoy the vibrant nature change my golden hair flowing and my cheeks blushed mauve and my lips ruby red waiting for a raindrop kiss the lovely emerald trees now vivid colors against the sky and squirrels are busy gathering and birds tweet a song as my feet crunch the leaves and the air is scented earthy oh, hello September ... ____________________ September 16, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/Oh, Hello September Copyright Protected, ID 09-1389-209-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Hello September sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 09/19/2021 Fourth Place
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Agustin Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... allowing me to enjoy September with you, since September rainy days are what we are now experiencing. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
La France Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Beata, thank you for the congrats and for the comment and compliment and you are welcome on your win ~ love and serenity _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 10:19 AM
This is just lovely Constance not only in its images but in the blending of the pensive undertones amid the beauty of the season. So nicely done. Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Sam, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Dear Constance, congratulations on your win. I love Fall, and I love your poem describing the pretty sights, and also the sadness in our heart losing all the fun of summer. But to me, the enchanting beauty of fall leaves make up for everything we miss. To my faves. Love and hugs ~ Mala
La France Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Mala, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment and the FAV ~ love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 2:21 PM
wonderful wonderful imagery Constance, a joy to read, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Babbit Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Decaying in the stillness but merely prep for a new spring. Congrats.
La France Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 8:12 AM
DM, thank you for the congrats and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Strand Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Your alphabet seems very popular Constance.Have a creative weekend
La France Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Brian, thanks for visiting, yes, the alphabet contests are amazing and fill so fast, I think poets are missing your contests ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Stellar penning, Constance:-) One of the best I've read for the contest and better than mine. I see this as a high placer in Mystic's contest.
La France Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Edward, thank you so much for that wonderful comment and compliment, I do hope Mystic likes my poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Brul Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Splendid write! September fills the air!!! Lovely! For the win!!
La France Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 9:37 AM
JCB, thank you so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
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