Oh Have You Ever

Oh have you ever wished on a falling star,_Or wondered how it came so far.__O have you ever dreamed of outer-space,_Or wondered if true love excises in the human race.__O have you ever put your faith in God,_Or wondered why some people think faith is odd.__O have you ever looked into some one's eye's,_And saw the wish of love dreamed on a falling stars from the skies.__O have you ever wished for world peace,_Or dreamed that man's wars would someday seace.__O have you ever thought we could raise the bar,_Or wondered how the human race lasted this far.__O so keep on wishing on your falling star,_And let no one tell you what a dreamer you are.__
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/8/2013 2:02:00 PM
Daniel :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Date: 12/1/2012 11:27:00 AM
Hi and welcome to the site. Nice first write here I enjoyed it, keep it up xx
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Date: 12/1/2012 6:50:00 AM
This sounds so much like a prayer or a song there are 2 great forms this verse could fit in which with a wee bit of work would work better/Ballad which is 8/6/8/6 syllables with a refrain] & Kryielle..they are in our form directory in the BLUE bar at the top of the page ;)][Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help or information it would be my pleasure to aid you. I am running a Contest now for 6 lines of verse on the topic light..please do enter. Light & Love]
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Date: 11/30/2012 4:10:00 PM
Wooow .... a bit of a 'first' poem .... very well written! Welcome to P-Soup, Daniel. - You write very well, hope you will share many poems here with us in the future. - Wish you a nice and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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