Oh, Gods! Please Go Away

As melodious meadows breeding play and fun,
With music of laughter and vibrant cheer,
Woven in the rhythm of playful wins and losses,
In grounds where sorrows fear to peep in...
Don’t bring the fog-stitched pathways of
Thobes, cassocks, or robes.
Oh, Gods, please go away and never come back.

As natterings and chatterings of tutees and tutors
Shatter the silky silence of budding nurseries,
Where friendship and hate are wedded couples,
Where undulating rituals fail to set their foot...
Don’t bring the evening spreads of
Chubas, albs, or kimonos.
Oh, Gods, please go away and never come back.

As clamps and forceps clatter in sync
While nursing pain and tending wounds,
Where nurses know the names of germs
More than the carriers bearing them—
Don’t bring the dying embers of
Rosaries, rudrakshas, or karas.
Oh, Gods, please go away and never come back.

As silent shuffling of paper dances
Spreading rays of words and newborn ideas,
Where yesterday’s crumbling glows are kept
In silver lines of ancient papyrus—
Don’t bring the rust-rimmed rattles of
Christians, Muslims, or Hindus.
Oh, Gods, please go away and never come back.

Then I’ll raise a golden palace
In the vacant land of my emptied heart;
I will bring the paradise within,
Where only truth and hope prevail.
Come with all your might and height,
And baptize me in your holy grail.
Oh, God—please come back, and stay within me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 1:55 AM
Many are like that, from disbelief to faith. May God give them the grace to change.
Somadas Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 12:25 AM
Thank you Victor for your visit and comment..
Rodgers Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Dear Jenish, such an intense, beautiful journey from rejection to ultimate acceptance. It’s a wonderful statement about finding the sacred within the self, separate from organized religion. Amen! Autumn Blessings, Dear Jenish, Daniel
Somadas Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 12:24 AM
Thank you Daniel.. I'm happy to know that you liked it..Only some hearts hear its rhythm...
Peck Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Wow, what an astounding poem! i especially like, "I will bring the paradise within where only truth and hope prevail."
Somadas Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Thank you Ann.. I'm happy to know that you liked it.. It calls only to a few..
Daniels Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Potently written, Jenish. A much needed message. Be blessed in your Paradise within. Salaams. Shanti. X.
Somadas Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 12:22 AM
Thank you Ghairo for your visit and comment..
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