Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Oh, Go Away Yesterday

Oh, Go Away Yesterday

It’s been long over between us two,
yet my emotions ignite when I think of you;
and my aura fades to dullest blue.
                    Oh, go away yesterday!

But you’ve been a jaybird happy and carefree,
ever since the day you had forsaken me,
scratching off our names from the old oak tree.
                    Oh, go away yesterday!

Even though my aching heart is one big mess,  
loving memories of you still leave me breathless,
recalling pure ecstasy when I was your “goddess.”
                    Oh, go away yesterday!

Once I believed we had a shared destiny,
and our  love would last for all eternity;
but now I know that was sheer insanity.
                    Oh, go away yesterday!



Date: 		05-05-2018

Contest:	 Rhyme and Refrain
Sponsor:	 Broken Wings
Placement: 3rd

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John Michaels November 14, 2018 at 3:35 PM Such a sad write, Pandita, but elegantly portraying those emotions of lost love. Congratulations on your win. Kind regards, John. Pandita Sietesantos November 17, 2018 at 5:29 PM Thank you, dear John for visiting and leaving your very-much appreciated insight and compliments! Have a lovely day! Hugs. Pandita

Gordon Mcconnell September 3, 2018 at 9:30 AM A rather fine piece of writing Pandita, expertly penned with super rhyme and flow. Trust this day finds you well, Blessings from Scotland, Gordon Pandita Sietesantos September 4, 2018 at 11:25 AM Dear Gordon, thank you so very much for your kind compliments which I greatly appreciate! Have an enjoyable day in wonderful Scotland! Hugs. Pandita

Al Juman July 4, 2018 at 9:47 AM It’s been long over between us two--- your pen is brilliant Pandita Sietesantos July 4, 2018 at 9:57 AM When it's over ... it's over ... time to move on:-)! Hi Al, thank you for visiting and leaving your encouraging compliment! Hope you are enjoying a day filled with sunshine! Best regards. Pandita

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 6:25 PM Lovely, Pandita. Congrats on your podium finish. Pandita Sietesantos June 2, 2018 at 8:12 PM Thank you very much, my dear Line, for your kind congratulatory words! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

James Inman May 15, 2018 at 8:00 PM The relationship may end but the feelings linger. Lovely write Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos May 16, 2018 at 1:57 PM That is true - but time can play a big role in helping to ease the pain and neutralizing the feelings:-)! Thank you, dear James for visiting and leaving your very-much appreciated insight and compliments! Have a lovely day! Hugs. Pandita

Constance La France May 15, 2018 at 2:35 PM Pandita, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ Pandita Sietesantos May 15, 2018 at 3:45 PM BW, I am absolutely thrilled! Thank you for including this piece on your list of winners! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry May 14, 2018 at 4:18 PM Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem. Compelling read for anyone going thru this and for those who came out on the other side. A good write. Pandita Sietesantos May 15, 2018 at 9:38 AM Hi Susan, it's always lovely to hear from you and I really appreciate your high praises and compliments. Thank you so much! Pandita

Curtis Moorman May 14, 2018 at 2:54 PM A sad commentary for a guy who would cause a shining jewel to lose its luster. On the bright side, gems can be polished and shine again. You will be sparkling soon because you are a winner. Pandita Sietesantos May 14, 2018 at 3:07 PM My friend, I appreciate your wonderful compliments which mean a lot to me! Thank you also for gracing this piece with such a very shining, inspirational comment for all those who have been burnt in love, encouraging them to dust-off their hearts and rise again! Thank you so very much, Curtis! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper May 7, 2018 at 12:51 PM lots of emotions in this poem to leave on upset and crying.. very well done , Pandita, a winner already .. Hugs Pandita Sietesantos May 7, 2018 at 1:33 PM Awwww - Eve, you are so sweet to leave me your lovely complimentary words. Thank you, my friend for your continued support which means a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita

Supraja Kannan May 7, 2018 at 8:02 AM Lovely entry for the contest... WOnderfully penned... Good luck in the contest... Pandita Sietesantos May 7, 2018 at 10:15 AM Hello Supraja, thank you so very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Hope you have an enjoyable week ahead! Hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo May 6, 2018 at 4:54 AM What a wonderful combination, your Names (Pandita the Lady Priestess, and Sanchez, the New, the Creole of Spain & Americas). Yes, the comments note the precious sadness ... let me NOT miss the strength, the resilience, that the dying woman's heart is the womb of rebirth/ amen (and Shalom, shalom) Pandita Sietesantos May 6, 2018 at 9:47 AM Awwwww! You have touched my heart with your beautiful comments about my name and awesome compliments about this piece! Thank you for the rays of sunshine today, dear Anil! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Gentry May 5, 2018 at 1:03 PM This is such a sad poem written so tenderly and beautifully. Should do great in the contest. ;) Pandita Sietesantos May 6, 2018 at 9:41 AM Hi Susan, I thank you so much for visiting and leaving me your lovely compliments! Have a sweet Sunday! Hugs. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri May 5, 2018 at 10:18 AM The best of luck in the contest dear Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:47 AM Thank you - thank you, dear Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri May 5, 2018 at 10:16 AM Thriving on the beauty of love, feeding on "loving memories", endowed with an amazing gift, mastering and adept ink, a piece of work is beautifully penned! I like the way you feel and shape your words! Dear Pandita a great pleasure to share the world of your words. Stay blessed. Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:48 AM Hello Besma, I appreciate your lovely heart-expressed comments and compliments which always mean the world to me! Hugs and blessings. Pandita

Faraz Ajmal May 5, 2018 at 8:49 AM Hi Pandita, really enjoyed reading this poem of yours, you have written it really nicely and full of emotions,somebody on poetrysoup (don t remember who he/she was) told me that the past is dead but the future can be bright, what s gone is gone, it s not going to return, but the future can be changed, so don t let your past destroy your future,good luck for the contest Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:50 AM Hi Faraz, thank you so much for visiting and leaving me your wonderful comments and complimentary words! Have a great weekend, my friend! Best regards. Pandita

Alexis Y. May 5, 2018 at 8:19 AM Hi Pandita, This is a good entry for the contest theme. The rhymes and content are on point. You are an exceptional talent my friend. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:51 AM Dear Alexis, thank you so very much for your kind compliments which I always appreciate! Have an enjoyable weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Mike Gentile May 5, 2018 at 8:09 AM So beautiful and I can so relate to it Pandita. Excellent xxoo Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:53 AM Awwww - thank you so much Mike, for visiting and leaving me your awesome compliments! Have a beautiful weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit May 5, 2018 at 6:01 AM Well crafted rhyme and refrain..superb as all your poems are! Pandita Sietesantos May 5, 2018 at 10:54 AM My dear Vijay, it's always a pleasure to receive your wonderful support and complimentary words that continue to encourage my work! Thank you, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Rico Leffanta May 4, 2018 at 8:41 PM Well done, but it might cheer you up to judge a contest along the line of the old French parable:, "Two tears were floating down the Seine. Cried one, "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover!" Sobbed the other, "I am the tear of the girl who found him!" Aloha! Rico Pandita Sietesantos May 4, 2018 at 9:03 PM Hahaha! Happy Cinco de Mayo to you too, mi amigo! I'm having Virgin Piña Coladas - LOL! Have a great weekend, Rico! Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2018 at 8:10 PM Very well written, Pandita. I need to get a few hours and work on some of these challenges put up this past week! Hope to do this well with mine for Constance. Pandita Sietesantos May 4, 2018 at 8:14 PM Oh thank you so much, Andy! I know you will pen something fabulous as you always do! You just have the magic touch! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Jan Allison May 4, 2018 at 4:43 PM beautiful but so sad Pandita - the line about scratching the names off the old tree really struck me, so sad when a relationship is over but these things aren't always meant to be:-( hugs jan xx Pandita Sietesantos May 4, 2018 at 4:47 PM Jan, thank you, my dear friend, for your lovely response. Yes, it is always sad when one person is left standing alone wondering what went wrong and why things didn't work out! Hope you and hubby have a beautiful, relaxing weekend! Hugs. Pandita