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For A Hi-Poo Senryu Poetry Contest

Sponsor: John Lawless

Oh, Fudge

dark like gooey fudge -

what I stepped in sure does not

smell like chocolate

chocolatesenryu

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Linda Alice Fowler

October 30, 2023 at 1:25 PM

LOL Andrea. A good one! Congratulations! :)

James Edward Lee Sr.

October 30, 2023 at 9:07 AM

Smelly stinky ooh! Grand job on your placement in contest

Terry Miller

October 30, 2023 at 8:59 AM

Yuck, congratulations.

Jan Allison

October 30, 2023 at 7:56 AM

oh yeuk lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2023 at 2:55 PM

That accidental stepping into some kind of poo is not a pleasant event at all. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I am wondering if this happened to you lately? Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Miranda Hawley

October 7, 2023 at 10:13 PM

I've stepped in that stuff once or twice, and its as gross as can be, and you are right about what it doesn't smell like!

Hiya Sharma

October 7, 2023 at 10:12 PM

Oh no, lol, this senryu made me laugh.. It's never tolerable to step on the gooey fudge.. You really nailed this one haha, brilliantly done!

Ink Empress

October 6, 2023 at 10:00 AM

Yikes! Omg! Hahah you’ve nailed it with this gooey senryu! I love it! Surely a top winner

Victor Buhagiar

October 6, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Lovely for the contest. I have to do without, poor me. Blessings

Bill Baker

October 6, 2023 at 7:36 AM

Oops! lol good one, Andrea. Great entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill

Mike Gentile

October 6, 2023 at 4:10 AM

OMG, I hadn't seen the contest prior to seeing your title and then then reading!! Not quite what I was expecting but boy did I laugh ! Great one Andrea! Happy Friday xxoo