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Oh Denmark

Oh,Denmark There is a dragon still alive a live With all the gold I hope that Beowulf will finally have his day Heorot will help the king With a sling of his sword No wounds will hurt No dragons will live In Denmark anymore People will love the king Finally they can win at something They can say they are from Denmark The dragons will come but they will die in their own fires King Hrothgar builds Heorot Hall Shield Sheafson who founded the ruling house The temples of Plato will take a incense of dragon's blood Virgil will rhyme how the Lord saved the king Plato will talk about a far off land call Woodland With all the forests and rain In the south Schleswig Has trees and meadows that grow There rose thorn's are a pain I hope I can kill all of them before I'm too old I watch the crows and wish I could fly away With my baby and Marius by my side On a dragon's back. To the land of wood and trees.

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2016 11:56:00 PM

Maria, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2016 2:39:00 PM

MARIA, HOPE TO SEE A NEW ONE FROM YOU SOON

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2016 3:36:00 PM

Maria Durdan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2016 8:18:00 PM

Maria, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@