Oh Deer

When a doe runs across the street A stag will soon follow her feet You may rant and rave, "The buck is not brave!" but her tail intimates a treat!

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Date: 6/25/2019 5:00:00 PM

Clever and very witty, Rico! You are a master of humor. Hope you are enjoying the first days of summer. Best wishes, Carolyn

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/25/2019 5:56:00 PM

A change in perspective is always worth a laugh! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico

Date: 6/24/2019 9:28:00 PM

Good one, Rico! Janice

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/25/2019 5:54:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Janice! Aloha! Rico

Date: 6/24/2019 8:17:00 PM

G'day Rico … it doesn't pay to interfere either. Recently a deer killed a bloke north of here. Catch you Rico - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/25/2019 5:54:00 PM

No surprise there! They may not be armed, but warfare certainly behooves them! Aloha! Rico

Date: 6/24/2019 3:24:00 PM

This made me smile Rico...so true. The male animal species is driven my their hormones. This was delightful! : )

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/25/2019 5:53:00 PM

As our the does! Aloha! Rico