Oh Deer

When a doe runs across the street
A stag will soon follow her feet
You may rant and rave,
"The buck is not brave!"
but her tail intimates a treat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Devonshire Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Clever and very witty, Rico! You are a master of humor. Hope you are enjoying the first days of summer. Best wishes, Carolyn
Leffanta Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:56 PM
A change in perspective is always worth a laugh! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Good one, Rico! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:54 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Janice! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 8:17 PM
G'day Rico … it doesn't pay to interfere either. Recently a deer killed a bloke north of here. Catch you Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:54 PM
No surprise there! They may not be armed, but warfare certainly behooves them! Aloha! Rico
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 3:24 PM
This made me smile Rico...so true. The male animal species is driven my their hormones. This was delightful! : )
Leffanta Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:53 PM
As our the does! Aloha! Rico
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