Oh, Will You Be My Valentine

My heart skips beats when you appear.
I'm feeling flushed, and that's the sign
it's time to ask you while you're here,
Oh will you be my Valentine?

You quickly give a boyish grin
and study me with eyes that shine.
A tipsy turvy world I'm in!
Oh, will you be my Valentine?

I want my fingers in your hair,
my mouth upon those lips divine.
I long to touch that face so fair.
Oh, will you be my Valentine?

I sing my love with this small rhyme.
What must I do to make you mine?
And so I ask you one more time,
Oh, will you be my Valentine?

For Nayda Ivette Negron's Love is in the Air Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/5/2017 10:12:00 AM
A wonderful Kyrielle Andrea. I liked reading it. Congrats! :D
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Date: 2/5/2017 6:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful write Andrea
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Date: 2/4/2017 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:40:00 PM
Wow! Sure my very dear friend, Andrea. How can I resist you with this very beautiful poem my dear friend? Have a very Happy Valentines to you and you and your Beloved One, Joe. Also your daughter Angela and family and everybody. Congrats on this featured poem. Sending my Love, Hugs and kisses to everyone! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 2/13/2016 2:06:00 PM
lovely romantic poem hope he says yes
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:35:00 AM
very nice that, hope you sent it to some lucky person cheers
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:10:00 AM
Greetings, Andrea. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. You are a very pretty young woman...many guys wish you were their Valentine, but you are already taken!!! Have a terrific day. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:00:00 AM
I love the emotional touch in your poem.... Congrats Andrea, for having this wonderful poem featured i the poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/9/2016 6:24:00 AM
ohhh Andrea...just wonderful!!! Congratulations love <3
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:13:00 AM
lovely valentine write Andrea, puts on in mood of love!
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:49:00 PM
ANDREA, Awesome magic win.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:59:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. So pleasant to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful Valentine write, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. A 7 Eve
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:39:00 AM
Lovely valentine, Andrea. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/31/2015 12:14:00 AM
Nice take on the theme, congrats on the win, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:15:00 PM
Cupid's arrow finds its mark with this lovely poem.....Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/30/2015 6:23:00 PM
Simply beautiful Andrea - i have never tried this form before - love the impact of the repeated line - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/14/2013 9:00:00 PM
Love the form and the elegantly simple sweetness of the message. Congrats! M
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Date: 2/13/2013 3:33:00 PM
Hey, this is nice. Good job. A very loving poem. I like it.
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:11:00 PM
Ha...went by to see why I was getting congrats on my poem...forgot I entered...and I see you are at the top of the list. I hadn't read this one...you are a true talent, Andrea...always so good.
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
A nice little win Andrea, Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:37:00 AM
wow!! ~sashi
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win on this very lovely Valentines poem my dear friend! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:51:00 AM
Way to go on the win...and right on time!
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:09:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea...I love the form you used....hugs
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