Deborah Burch Poet Verse

Ogre

Ogre

Often he’s a cranky,
Olive-skinned, swamp dwelling,
Obtusely-witted fiend...
Only bathes in mud—eats
Onions, garlic, ...(sniff)... GAS?!!
Ogre’s in the outhouse!!
Oh! My giddy aunt...RUN!

©deborah burch
4.06.2021

Pleiades 
Kim Merryman’s Pleiades O Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2021 at 2:51 PM Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara Deborah Burch April 9, 2021 at 3:12 PM Thanks so very much Sara!! Big huggs!! Deb

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2021 at 10:14 AM - Deborah, nice to see you back on the soup :) - Congratulations on your fun win poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Deborah Burch April 8, 2021 at 11:02 AM Helllllloooo!!! My sweet friend!! Thank you!! And thank you for the congratulations!! I hope you are well!! Big huggs and much love my friend!! Deb

Alexis Y. April 7, 2021 at 8:46 PM Hi Deborah, You've penned a hilarious write with “ O”s. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a good evening:-) Alexis Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 8:55 PM Alexis!! Thanks so much sweetie!! I’m glad it made you laugh!! Lol!! Isn’t laughter healing!! Big huggs!! Deb

Robert Pettit April 7, 2021 at 8:32 PM Congratulations on winning with this entry. I would have never thought of writing something as clever as this! Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 8:39 PM Lol! Thank you Robert!! Big huggs! Deb

Kim Rodrigues April 7, 2021 at 4:00 PM lol...too funny! Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 8:26 PM Lol!! Thanks Kim!! Glad you got a giggle!!big huggs sweetie!! Deb

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2021 at 2:41 PM run run, this is fun fun fun!!! BIG congrats. I love this. Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 3:13 PM Baahaaahaa!!! Thank you Andy!! I liked your omelettes as well. Congrats!! to you!!Big huggs my friend!!! Love ya. Deb

Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:28 PM Deborah, this was simply hilarious! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 2:07 PM Lol!! Oh Kim! Thank you so very much for this honour!! I’m glad you got a good chuckle!! Big huggs! Deb

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2021 at 7:48 AM Congratulations on your win. "So Cute" You made me laugh. Have a blessed day writing away.................... Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 12:38 PM Thank you Paula!! Laughter is good medicine!! Lol! Big hugggs!! Deb

Eve Roper April 6, 2021 at 10:06 PM Great write, Deborah, congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve Deborah Burch April 7, 2021 at 6:45 AM Oh my!! Lol! Thank you so much Eve!! Big huggs!! Deb