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Officially Known As A Shut-In

Heard the word often when I was younger A “shut-in” is what I'm referring to Have finally reached that sad state of affairs Methinks we'll all make it through Until a few years ago life's been a blast Sure seems like I've been on a high Everything has been turning up roses Living with stars in my eyes Now I glance out my window and all I see People smiling enjoying each other Is this how it ends a common occurrence Still have memories to discover

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/3/2024 7:43:00 AM

But your mind isn't Jack, you can go wherever you like, soar like an eagle. Tom

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2024 7:59:00 AM

It's the takeoff that's the problem! Being airborne birdies have an advantage called wings!!! Hope your day is going well!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/3/2024 5:03:00 AM

oh, felt twinges of sadness as I read your poem. I appreciate your feelings and am grateful you have a positive spin on things. I agree...through life's mirror we can 'see' again all our memories...perhaps that's the point not to be distracted by the 'outside.' ???? rambling thoughts...too much caffeine hugs, Sara

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2024 6:13:00 AM

A time comes for all of us dear sweet friend Sara! I still have the same old desires to write and add my life thoughts! My brain is still active... for as long as I still write poetry and remain in the loop! Who knows how long that will be! Much love dear Sara xxx