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Aroused with head of hair. O grizzly bear! Awake! As fangs do sink into my neck. Reward, if you...O king, my life will spare. I gnaw my nails, depressed...for i’m a wreck. Do you, O beast hear buzzing...wink. Oh honey! You hear the slap of salmon steak, I think?! For you the fields of sticky gold, like money, And hallowed fish - right there! Look there! (I blink) He scuffles off in search of prey. I hurry! Make tracks before he snatches me for snack. My tent long gone. I sigh. I see a flurry. I’d like to catch a break. Just then...a smack. Those lips are huge, the tongue so cruel. I growl. Bereft, I sit within the creature’s bowel. 11/4/2017 Brian Strand Contest #360

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Date: 11/11/2017 9:02:00 AM
Not a pretty way to go, Kim. Jonah had the better deal! Many thanks for stopping by. Always appreciated. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2017 9:06:00 AM
For sure! Thanks Maurice!
Date: 11/9/2017 7:47:00 PM
Very vivid imagery, well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 11/9/2017 7:20:00 PM
Didn't expect the ending--well written, Kim--best for a win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 11/9/2017 5:12:00 PM
Well penned Kim..a chilling ending...GL in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thanks, Joe!

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