Offering

I'd offer you a hand,
but every time you say
"Don't bother."
I'd offer you a hand,
But I just get dirty looks.
What would you do,
If I were to offer a foot?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 29, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Sarah, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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January 22, 2009 at 2:17 PM
What a lovely poem!!! Cleverly put! Congratulations!
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January 22, 2009 at 1:55 PM
LOL, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, made me laugh at the end, Good one..God Bless*Tyesha
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January 22, 2009 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations sarah, on "Offering" being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Sarah - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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January 21, 2009 at 2:07 PM
Had to chuckle at the last line. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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January 19, 2009 at 3:25 PM
A foot, indeed! Well written, Sarah. Congratulations for being featured this week. Donna G.
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January 19, 2009 at 3:25 PM
I get a kick out of your stuff, Sarah. Good humor....good vengeance....good ridance. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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January 19, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar
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January 4, 2009 at 4:51 PM
people are just sometimes to proud to accept help from others and that is me sometimes. great and real poetry, enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS.... [SMILE]
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