Off I Go

Off I go in the direction of career To lose you is my worst fear What will you do when I’m no longer near What will become of us my dear Nothing is promised but our feelings are clear Falling in love has not been easy for us Little by little we earned each others trust My heart is yours to keep I’ve given in; taken the leap It’s only you and your love I seek Just the thought of leaving makes me weep Remember our good times when you’re alone If you need me please pick up the phone Tell Mister Jay I say hey everyday That I miss him and can’t wait to play Don’t forget what you feel for me today I’ll only be a phone call away In my mind and in my heart you will stay I love you… is all that's left to say Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Good work expressing those feelings..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Good wording and rhyming in this presentation. A fine effort.
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January 23, 2011 at 3:42 PM
good day, Lay hows it been here on the soup.. off i went into my career this year.. honestly now i regret it.. the fears of me not finding the passion in my job.. and reality hit already... nice poem,..p.d.
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January 23, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Lay this is so sweetly written from the depths of your heart to someone special.. choosing between career and luv is always difficult but possible.. my friend.. my hubby and I did it and now together all the time.. so worth the sacrifice for now but if true in the end comes back to u luv.. special and enjoyed this happy Sunday.. good luck with your new contest...
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January 23, 2011 at 7:17 AM
such an honest, expressive write, lay.. hope you'll enter this in a contest with m winning wishes... thanks so much for acknowledging the piece i created for your contest.. i'm touched! :) hugggs, nette
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