Off Beat

OFF BEAT Stay… in time make this rhyme so much pressure too much…. altogether BEHAVE Whisper quietly 1-2-3-4 fall floor door once more BEHAVE Relax…. its real you know can you feel? the glow? you know BEHAVE Feel…. anything? at all? once more fall floor door MISBEHAVE… off beat © Kim van Breda—29 June 2015
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Makama Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:28 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Muideen Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 5:10 PM
What an excellent write, so beautiful and wise. love it.................A.M
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