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Of Those Who Loved Her

Lilting voice of tender carriage Defined her gentle being As time had not dismissed Her childlike charisma Laughter often narrates thought When memories give rise Recalling her demeanor In sweet tempered innocence For in a world of dusk and gloom Her light, a shimmer fair Would offer loving respite From course of heart’s concern Though now her voice no longer Carries forth the air we breathe It will surely live forever In the care of those who loved her Dedicated to my loving Godmother who slipped away to sing elsewhere 7/24/18

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Date: 7/31/2018 8:44:00 AM
Ahh, it is such a sweet and lovely tribute to your godmother, I am so sorry for your loss, your poem here shows your love, may God gives you patience, good luck my friend and have a really nice day
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/31/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Faraz!!
Date: 7/30/2018 2:53:00 PM
A beautiful dedication Mike! Very well done :) Your writing is lovely to read :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2018 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi!!
Date: 7/30/2018 2:12:00 PM
Truly tender tribute, Mike. May her heart's concern live on in you. ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Gershon
Date: 7/30/2018 1:53:00 PM
This is so sweet and well-written Mike! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Janice!!
Date: 7/29/2018 10:49:00 PM
I am so sorry for your loss Mike. Your tribute makes it clear how loved she was. I am sure her family will adore this tender treasure. : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie !!
Date: 7/27/2018 12:36:00 PM
This is a tender and delightful dedication to your God-Mother, Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/27/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Lyric Man!!
Date: 7/27/2018 12:53:00 AM
- Sounds like a wonderful lady ... with a smile about her mouth ... lovely written, Mike :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/27/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne=Lise !!
Date: 7/26/2018 9:51:00 PM
Wonderful dedication Mike, xomo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/27/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Maureen !!
Date: 7/26/2018 4:18:00 PM
A beautiful tribute, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/26/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Warren!
Date: 7/26/2018 3:28:00 PM
A heartfelt tribute you wrote Mike..tender and peaceful words...beautiful poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/26/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!!!
Date: 7/26/2018 3:25:00 PM
This is a perfect, beautifully written poem Mike. God bless her and you :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/27/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi !!

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