Of the First Decan

I'm not on the cusp; I'm made of the first decan
Can't stop on a dime; it's a fully loaded train
Emotions flow next to the blood; in every vein

So all the tricks they tried; did nothing; had ill affects
Called back and lied; about the results and side effects
Or about the time you lose; when they ride you hard, and yet it still leaves you old; or dead
Relayed the sadness, your bareback in an all-out sprint; no going back, only ahead
Pity; there's no such thing; as building a healthy wall; just to tear it down
Inside; no place left to fall; when your back's already, staked out on the ground!
Oh please; my forgiveness is freezing cold, it can't be bought or sold; bring on the next round!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/23/2023 4:52:00 PM
Very deep...so it has to do with the extra days in the year, the decan being an astrology thing. Very creative! Your work is so fresh!
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Date: 10/23/2023 7:49:00 PM
You are partially right my friend! Thank you for trying to see the true me! Warmly A.S
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