Of Stomach-aches and Birthday Cakes

     Give thanks for a stomach-ache
       same as for a birthday cake

     Do your elbows feel good today ~
       that'll seal the deal, the grateful say
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Nice couplets, gw. BB
Faulkner Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 4:15 PM
I still think birthday cake has no calories, at least when it's your birthday!
M  Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Like this BB …..l love birthday cake and if l eat too much….tummy ache!! Debx
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