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Of Passions I Own

Sensing and yearning allure of daydreams My musings amble in meadows of themes, Sometimes wowing ebullience of dawning, Sometimes luxuriating in moonlit evening Gazing lambent skies of stellar twinkling, Inviting me to echo my inner most feelings; Of whispers romantic when love is courting, Of giggling streams and blossoming springs, Of resplendent autumn’s falling gilded leaves, Of fate unkind, bawling, in throes of grief, Of pristine joy beaming from mother’s eyes Jubilant in delight of child’s innocent smile; Of ebb and flow to life in seasons undulating Spurring me to attribute form and meaning. So, I write verses stemming from core of soul Striving to capture essence of elusive words, Exploring assonance, even in rhymeless prose, Attempting to inspire spirit of wordless woes As thoughts-poetic heart’s rhythms compose; Of chromatic sunsets and scintillating dawns, Of starless nights hosting tenebrous bygones, Of tales strumming romance, of fables forlorn, Of ideas enthroned, of paradigms bemoaned, Of boundless expressions, of passions I own. August 30, 2022 Placed 2nd: I Write Because Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 10/29/2022 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations for #1 on the best new poem list Vijay :)
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Date: 10/23/2022 12:45:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Vijay - Congrats on best poem out of 100...well deserved :) - hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate.
Date: 10/23/2022 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this one being on the best poems' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Date: 10/17/2022 8:32:00 PM
Happy to see the list of top 100 poems recently updated and your poem being moved from the top second to top first. Once again Congratulations dear friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
So glad to see you again. Many thanks, Valsa.
Date: 10/16/2022 8:24:00 AM
So full … so rich with the language of your heart and soul dear Vijay . Your mind expands to realms others only dream of. We lucky ones get to ride the magic carpet of your intellect, heart and passion through your beautiful poetry . Hugs and belated congratulations on your win . Keep inspiring us ! Susan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
So very kind of you Susan. Much appreciate visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 10/10/2022 11:26:00 PM
Very evocative and imagery saturated writing, Vijay. Congratulations on best new poem, well earned ~ John
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Date: 10/23/2022 1:46:00 PM
So very kind of you. Many thanks, John.
Date: 10/3/2022 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations once again Vijay on this gem of a poem placed Second in the list of the Best hundred poems of the season.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
Much appreciate your return visit, Valsa. Many thanks.
Date: 9/19/2022 4:02:00 PM
This is wonderful, Vijay…..right down to that last beautiful line. Best, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
Thank you SuZ--much appreciate.
Date: 9/15/2022 5:01:00 AM
And your musings never fail to amaze us... So beautifully written... Loved each and every lines... My fav...
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Date: 10/23/2022 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.
Date: 9/14/2022 11:11:00 PM
Incredibly lovely Vijay, the last two lines 'Of ideas enthroned, of paradigms bemoaned, Of boundless expressions, of passions I own.' Very beautiful <3
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:44:00 PM
Glad you liked the poem BJ. Many thanks.
Date: 9/14/2022 5:39:00 AM
Great passion of writing. Beautifully elucidated. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 9/13/2022 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay on your great win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Valsa.
Date: 9/12/2022 7:27:00 PM
Superb rhyming and meter. A poem is written from the heart on the reasons you compose poetry. We are grateful to you, buddy, for allowing us to share in the gift of poetry that you possess. Best wishes for a win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2022 1:43:00 PM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:34:00 AM
Your words convey much love and romance in your creative style Vijay. An exceptional entry for this contest. When reading the reader feels the romantic emotions you relay in your words filling the readers heart. As always your expressive communication is at the highest level of Poetry my friend. Congratulations for another winner...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/12/2022 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Michael. I will always enjoy your cheerful remarks. Much appreciate your support my friend.
Date: 9/10/2022 6:20:00 AM
Vijay you never disappoint with your beautiful poetry….we would be missing out if you didn’t! …Debx
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Deb--much appreciate.
Date: 9/9/2022 11:00:00 PM
Aw...Excellent inspiring entry for the contest...So many lines I loved...What a gifted writer you are Vijayji...Adding it to my favs. Have a blessed day...~ Ani
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:43:00 AM
Always a delight to read your feedback, Ani. Much appreciate your kind remarks and especially your FAVE. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 9/9/2022 3:41:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Vijay. Awesome imagery! Best wishes in the contest my friend. Have a wonderful weekend! Charlie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2022 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 9/7/2022 7:25:00 PM
Your inspiration comes from nature's many themes and much more, Well penned Vijay
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Date: 9/10/2022 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 9/6/2022 4:06:00 PM
I don't know if this contest got judged yet, but I bet it's a hit with the judge. So much beautiful imagery, Vijay. Sorry I have been gone a while. I hope to get back to all my commenting now, starting today.
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Date: 9/7/2022 6:22:00 AM
Glad to hear that from you, Andrea. I know, you are busy with family matters--so, not a problem for me. Sending good wishes your way--hoping your husband will fully recover soon. Many thanks.
Date: 9/6/2022 7:26:00 AM
You do capture the essence of poetic words rendering in sublime and variant forms a wealth of substance and meaning! The wonders of our worlds. the complexities of our mundane issues do invite and inspire a poet of grandeur to "echo his inner most feelings " and "writes verses stemming from core and soul"! You are an amazing poet who owns a great passion for writing poetry! And it is always an honour and an immense pleasure to read you dear Vijay. God bless your beautiful soul. Best regards
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2022 6:19:00 AM
So very kind of you, Besma. haven't seen your poems in awhile. Much appreciate your presence on my page and your complimentary remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 9/4/2022 11:51:00 AM
Vijay, this is such a descriptive message about why you write poetry. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2022 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 9/3/2022 5:13:00 PM
Verses that to me reveal a true poet heart, keen mind and depths of soul that awes me. The imagery, passion, beauty and truth in this new creation are all stellar. A great pleasure to read and marvel at its evidence of poetic mastery. A fav, God bless.,,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2022 7:04:00 AM
Coming from a great poet that you are-- your comments are a source of inspiration, Robert. I am glad to read your kind thoughts and honored to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 9/3/2022 4:00:00 PM
Vijay it is obvious why you write Poetry conveyed by this wonderfully written Verse. Your Rhyming is perfect, the theme you have conveyed is unique, creative, and exceptional. Your phrases are formatted by only a writer with great creativity and passion. Your vocabulary is vast in expressing your thoughts and ideas, impressive to know. It is clear your knowledge of words would make the Webster dictionary jealous. A favorite my friend...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2022 7:01:00 AM
I am humbled by your complimentary remarks my friend. Much inspiration you provide to many on Soup with your insightful comments, Michael. Your presence on Soup and my page is always much appreciated. Many thanks.
Date: 9/3/2022 10:41:00 AM
Vijay, it is so clear to me, the many passions that you possess as they are reflected beautifully on your works, especially in your romantic lines!! A great entry, good luck !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2022 6:58:00 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
Date: 9/3/2022 7:41:00 AM
Another stimulating and visual write from you Vijay. You never disappoint! This is stunning and captures the essence of your writings! Linda
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2022 6:57:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Linda. Many thanks.
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