Of My True True Love I Write

****************** I write of true love. For you, you have been my life, forty-eight years of friendship, openness, true bliss. With words, I have worshipped you! No doubt in my mind, love you! As each year went by, our love grew strong, our bond tight. Moonlight oft led to rapture, many stary nights. We rolled in snow, ducked and dived. Our first two now four and five. Me working, missing you, the kids too, weekends new, like the first time, we met, joy! A love fest, the best! Grateful kids were good sleepers. Sunday, park day, kids loved it! How years fly, such fun, her mum, me dad, finding time, for making love, yes, of course its what lovers do. Our life together such bliss! We smile kisses, blow them too. Now forty-eight years! Would we do it all again? Her with me and me with you? Joking, I've never strayed, my heartbeats for my wife, now and in another life. ************

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Date: 10/9/2018 4:29:00 AM
its lovely writing- wow
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Date: 7/12/2018 7:49:00 PM
Big wow love and hugs my friend. Wonderful <3 xomo!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/13/2018 4:27:00 AM
Many gracious thanks Maureen, Mick
Date: 6/17/2018 3:54:00 AM
aww Mick many congratulations to you and Aileen - wow 48 years together is fantastic. I LOVE the line 'for you, you have been my life' such love and commitment is wonderful to see, and i adore the humour in the poem adding this gem to my faves:-) It's our 27th anniversary next week:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/17/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thanks on all counts Jan! Aileen is still very poorly, hope your finger is better! Should I miss the 27th, (I won't, the same day different month for the Mrs. The next day, same month we got married), but just in case, congratulations for 27 years. Mick
Date: 6/17/2018 3:39:00 AM
That is so wonderful, to have that and rare these days. So good to know that some can achieve and joyfully embrace what others will never know. Bought tears ...
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/17/2018 8:56:00 AM
She's precious, truly my life, thanks Virginia! Mick
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