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Quote:

We all want to be famous people, and the moment we want to be something we are no longer free.” (Jiddu Krishnamurti)

http://www.brainyquote.com/quotes/quotes/j/jiddukrish386309.html#R3zC8FmJD2GhjMAf.99

3 Proverbs:

A prophet is not recognized in his own land
All's fair in love and war
Barking dogs seldom bite

http://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/proverbs.html

Here’s a few examples of my word play

1. of love of war [title] – (All’s fair in love and war)
2. Yelp puppy love (Barking dogs seldom bite)
3. Pent (no longer free)

of love of war
the staff of a prophet, seen fairness not imagine, sings shouting out, obscenity recognized, yet in search of fame, seeking stance the moment arises, seek of voice of power, godsend renown supremacy, yet prophet not acknowledged, kept desire of a great life, sought skill of voice, articulate hardly ever, cheek no longer free, famous self seldom bite snarls dogma, link of country of faith, kinship all that’s true, fair play desired fame acknowledged, pent the home front, covetousness war or peace love or hate, just yelp puppy love, nice _________________________| Penned on September 28, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/7/2015 10:07:00 PM
Verlena.. A wonderful winning write, I salute you!
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:43:00 AM
Thanks Lyric for your super awesome response... Verlena
Date: 9/1/2015 1:52:00 AM
Wonderful write and a superb win! Big congrats Verlena!
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:42:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma for your super awesome response... Verlena
Date: 10/4/2014 10:16:00 AM
nice poem, great write, mi love this richard
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Date: 10/4/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Richard for these high marks... Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations to You;Verlena!!! I think this is just an awesome write for You...Keep up the nice work-Hugs-Char
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Date: 9/30/2014 1:53:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations Charlene. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations Verlena!! on having your poem chosen for "Poem of the Day." I liked your use of the Dodoitsu form style in framing and crafting this very well-conceptualized work. Bravo!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Gray for your super-awesome response. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 11:25:00 AM
Way to go Verlena! Congratulations on being chosen for poem of the day.
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Rick for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on being chosen as the poem of the day for your marvelous poem.
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Maurice for your congratulations. Maurice
Date: 9/30/2014 6:09:00 AM
Congrats, Verlena. :) Happy for you and this piece on such a timely subject. The ending was sweet.
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Eileen on your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 6:02:00 AM
i am really so pleased for you congratulations well deserved smiling
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Liam for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 5:12:00 AM
- A really clever poem Verlena! - Congratulations : Poem of the Day !- I wish you a nice day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on this difficult form and POD....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/30/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Tim for your congratulations on my poem being featured as POD. Verlena
Date: 9/29/2014 8:58:00 PM
To seek fame is to search for worth, freedom is beyond recognition, freedom is self respect. Your poem of metaphysical genius provkes this sight in me Verlena. Luxury is an ambush against soul strength. You are such a beautiful oracle Verlena. This poem educates with riddle quality. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Justin for your super-awesome remarks and superlative response. I am here philosophically. Sending a smile, Verlena...
Date: 9/29/2014 3:13:00 PM
Glad to see someone doing this one, Varlena. You have a lot of courage. This is one I don't think I can even attempt! I think you must love a good hard challenge!!
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:21:00 PM
Yes, worth the try and thanks Andrea for your thumbs up... Verlena
Date: 9/28/2014 9:33:00 AM
Yes, I agree, you nicely play with the words, Verlena
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
Date: 9/28/2014 7:47:00 AM
You are a word master. I applaud your style. Well done! :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Casarah.... Verlena