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Of Love

Love within its stupor

an emotional rollercoaster 

ride of instability for 

before you know it 

you’re down again.





July.27.2019
One Sentence Metaphor in Free Verse 
Sponsored by: Jesse Rowe

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Ashmi Sheth Date: 8/16/2019 9:07:00 AM Amazing lines! Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 8/1/2019 11:47:00 AM Best wishes in the Contest. A talent like you, should win! God Bless Panagiota Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 7/30/2019 7:58:00 PM love is always an emotional roller coaster i guess the trick is to find the balance...Nice message within this finely penned poem! :) hugs Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 7/30/2019 7:41:00 PM Love holds many emotions indeed. It is a wonderful feeling when the heart is reaching the sky!! Yes, sometimes moments in love are low. So beautifully written and expressed my Warrior with Wings. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 7/29/2019 4:18:00 PM Great message, in the fact one has to work hard at love...good luck in contest. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/28/2019 2:08:00 PM - Excellent ! - (and true) - Luck in the contest, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 7/27/2019 5:30:00 PM Hi WW, You explained it well in a few words. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you are having a wonderful thus far:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 7/27/2019 4:41:00 PM you did this so well... Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/27/2019 2:10:00 PM Love is an emotional rollercoaster and with each ride you are gambling with your heart Great write ^WW^ my friend., Hugs, love and blessings, Jenn. Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/27/2019 12:48:00 PM so apt for life! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 7/27/2019 9:42:00 AM Indeed, bro bro. Your poem is a wondrous expression of how love can thrill you, lift you and let you down - hard sometimes. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes and hugs for you always big bro.. your stayin on track sane sissy.. Illum Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 7/27/2019 7:45:00 AM Good one, WW. Login to Reply