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Of Jagged Pieces

I will turn back the pages all the tattered pages of my life yellowed and brittle and wet with tears oh, a sweetness comes amid the dregs of sorrows and brings a hush and I find myself weeping an ocean of moments as the drum of time rolls and rolls and rolls endlessly I had found true love, oh he was my everything we had so many dreams for our future we laughed and drank from the deep blue cup of sky but, in the book of life his destiny was written and what is written will be and he became a name engraved in cold stone and life became a lake of silence without imagination and my heart was shattered in a thousand pieces I travelled a road of resentment until I found acceptance and I discovered a strength dwelling within me so, I picked up every shattered piece of my heart with courage and serenity and tranquility and glued all the pieces back together knowing my heart will forever be a scarred puzzle of jagged pieces _________________ July 21, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/of jagged pieces Copyright Protected, ID 07-1374-665-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand July 22 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 7/23/2021 9:59:00 AM
Beautifully written Constance with strong metaphors and powerful pensive images. Congratulations on your win. Life does leave scars on our hearts as we put the pieces back together glued together with God's super glue of grace. Blessings to you dear friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2021 12:11:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment and congratulations and nice comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/21/2021 4:42:00 PM
great write, filled with good imagery and nice metaphors... what else is there to do but pick up those pieces and move on... enjoyed this one! hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2021 10:32:00 AM
Sandra, thank you for the compliment on my poem and your comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/21/2021 11:11:00 AM
"a sweetness comes amid the dregs of sorrows and brings a hush"...That line in particular and this entire poem...a brilliant weave of jagged pieces. Beautifully done Constance.
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Date: 7/22/2021 10:32:00 AM
John, thank you for the visit, comment nd compliment, appreciate a lot ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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