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Of jaded muses and digital distractions - POTW

The allure of mused poems,
No longer visits this nonchalant psyche.
It trickles now, once a roaring torrent
Now a lazy stream

Am like a desultory jaded heaven
Where starry jewels once decked the night,
But are now drossy shadowy blackholes,
And sparks and dreams, 
Are ripped in the accretion disc.

No longer avid, but seeking meaning in the mundane.
No longer enraptured by the she said, he said,
And all that jazz, no iota of care; for trifling muses,
Their short goodbyes or critique, no not one,
Their infighting and bad blood, no longer,
No nuts to crack, nor rain to flush, no iota of care.

It was never about who is better,
Neither has it been nor will it ever be,
About any Magnum Opus.

Like doors closing and skies descending,
Each visiting muse devoid of ardor,
Oblivious to the yawning dawn,
Or the scent of sprouting posies.
Jaded, without allure or sheen
And devoid of all its lustre.

Maybe one day soon a spark will reignite
And reanimate this frenetic mused madness
But until then...

I remain adrift in this sea of trivialities,
Worrying about trifling stuff 
Like ad blockers and AI opinions 
And irked...

By their emasculating knowledge

Poem Of The Week(POTW) -9/15/2024 To 9/21/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Mo Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Amen
Bartley Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. Thanks for sharing!
Buch Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:29 PM
"It trickles now, once a roaring torrent Now a lazy stream." So apt! Congratulations for the POTW honour!
Rodgers Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Hello Marugu, There are so many distractions that technology puts on society and creativity. So well stated and all the exasperation that comes with change. A great POTW and I hope that muse does return. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Nicole Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 4:31 PM
The muse: ' It trickles, ' but now a lazy stream. ' Yes, I think we can all relate. It's can be frustrating, but waiting is best. ' Words ' will always appear when the time is right. :) You've created a masterpiece, my dear friend. Congratulations Marugu, on Poem of the Week. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:51 AM
Thank you so much Brandy
Cunningham Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Quite a thought provoking verse Marugu, congratulations to you on the honour of POTW. Tom
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Tom
White Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Well well decorum at it’s finest, a poetic feast of analogies, thank you Mr Mo
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 4:12 AM
Thx my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your write. "Write On" Have a blessed day/week with your win................
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Paula!
Greenhough Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW.
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Hilda
Williams Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Wow MM - Firstly congrats on your POTW. This is Theatrical - I'm glad i stumbled on your rendition. As a writer, both lyric and video maker, as well as being in love with Theatre, I salute your narration. Maria
Mo Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 2:49 AM
Thanks. I am intrigued with your line of work. In this day and age one might be tempted to think Theatre and the performing arts are dead. I will visit
May Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 11:57 AM
When the muse loses its shine, it leaves us drifting in the shadows, Very nicely penned
Mo Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 9:11 PM
thanks Joseph
Jones Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Wow! What a powerful piece and matching presentation! I love the music and wonderful inflections in your voice! This has so much passion and should be poem of the day! Cool beans! I appreciate your sharing!
Mo Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Thanks for your comments and visit. About the voice that's AI generated. I thought I experiment with spoken word and dramatic monologue prompts. I liked what it spewed out and here we are
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Wow! Where do i begin praising this MM, i just love the spoken too, so powerful! And your words resonate with me and you really have a way with words! I cant even! I love especially “ No longer avid, but seeking meaning in the mundane. No longer enraptured by the she said, he said, And all that jazz, no iota of care; for trifling muses, Their short goodbyes or critique, no not one,“ how powerful! Whoa! And the ending! I was just thinking the same two days ago, about how im sick and tired, of AI opinions, and yes Maybe one day soon a spark will reignite, until then, dont stop, expressing anyhow! What an impressive write this is! A fave definitely. Sending you light always
Mo Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 11:41 PM
Thanks Inky. Ironically creating poetry when feeling so sapped of creativity. I was inspired to re-post/re-write this by your poem vanishing point. Thanks for your thoughtful words. Love&Light
One Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Quite a philosophical and intellectual write.. great use of vocabulary and expression here..
Mo Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 1:31 AM
Thanks SO
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Interesting lines penned. Thanks for sharing. We all go through dry spells but then there will be a spark to ignite a large volume of work. Sara K
Mo Avatar
September 10, 2024 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Sara. I sure hope so
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