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Of Friendship

Friendship is a beautiful warm loaf of bread baked faithfully with kindness and lavishly spread with the honey butter of love. 7/28/19 for Jesse Rowe's One Sentence Metaphor In Free Verse Poetry Contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/4/2019 9:06:00 PM

It’s such a pleasure to return and reread your endearing poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

P.S. Awtry

Date: 8/4/2019 11:30:00 AM

nice one Andrea! Congratulations :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/2/2019 3:57:00 PM

Great one! Love "honey butter of love"! I wish they would sell it!

Randy Steele

Date: 8/2/2019 8:22:00 AM

Andrea, congrats on your win. Beautifully written. Nice job.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/2/2019 6:53:00 AM

Andrea, back to offer congrats on your win for this wonderfully written verse. John

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2019 5:05:00 AM

Bravo, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Jesse Rowe

Date: 8/1/2019 11:41:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your placement in my contest. I greatly enjoyed your metaphor of friendship. I am certain friendship is also in the sharing of such a wonderful loaf of bread. If your friends are sharing such wonderful spreads than I am sure they are doubly blessed!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/31/2019 12:50:00 PM

Bread baked from scratch is truly the symbol of friendship, best of luck in the contest!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 7/30/2019 11:56:00 PM

Beautiful (and fitting) metaphor... as friendship is the PERFECT "comfort food"! ;)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/30/2019 8:51:00 PM

These sweet words made me feel warm and toasty all over. After reading, I heard myself say 'ah' aloud. Love, your friend!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/30/2019 2:29:00 PM

Couldn't have said it any better - never a truer word spoken. Well penned Andrea. Hugs, Jennifer.

Alesia Leach

Date: 7/29/2019 1:51:00 PM

awesome metaphors in this mouthwatering poem. Best of luck in the contest ;0)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/28/2019 10:18:00 PM

You make friendship sound soo good, Andrea. A delectable and beautiful metaphorical poem. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/28/2019 9:24:00 PM

This one fairly sparkles, Andrea ---and it warms the soul. Bravo. A sure winner. Best wishes, Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2019 9:19:00 PM

Marvelous metaphors in this wonderfully written poem Andrea. "Honey butter of love" is a brilliant way to end your poem! This is sure to be a top winner. xxoo