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Of Friendship

Friendship is 

a beautiful warm loaf of bread

baked faithfully with kindness

and lavishly spread

with the honey butter of love.


7/28/19 for Jesse Rowe's One Sentence Metaphor In Free Verse Poetry Contest

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Susan Ashley Date: 8/4/2019 9:06:00 PM It’s such a pleasure to return and reread your endearing poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply

P.S. Awtry Date: 8/4/2019 11:30:00 AM nice one Andrea! Congratulations :) Login to Reply

Timothy Mcguire Date: 8/2/2019 3:57:00 PM Great one! Love "honey butter of love"! I wish they would sell it! Login to Reply

Randy Steele Date: 8/2/2019 8:22:00 AM Andrea, congrats on your win. Beautifully written. Nice job. Login to Reply

John Gondolf Date: 8/2/2019 6:53:00 AM Andrea, back to offer congrats on your win for this wonderfully written verse. John Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 8/2/2019 5:05:00 AM Bravo, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Jesse Rowe Date: 8/1/2019 11:41:00 PM Andrea, congrats on your placement in my contest. I greatly enjoyed your metaphor of friendship. I am certain friendship is also in the sharing of such a wonderful loaf of bread. If your friends are sharing such wonderful spreads than I am sure they are doubly blessed! Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/31/2019 12:50:00 PM Bread baked from scratch is truly the symbol of friendship, best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Rhona Mcferran Date: 7/30/2019 11:56:00 PM Beautiful (and fitting) metaphor... as friendship is the PERFECT "comfort food"! ;) Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 7/30/2019 8:51:00 PM These sweet words made me feel warm and toasty all over. After reading, I heard myself say 'ah' aloud. Love, your friend! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/30/2019 2:29:00 PM Couldn't have said it any better - never a truer word spoken. Well penned Andrea. Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Alesia Leach Date: 7/29/2019 1:51:00 PM awesome metaphors in this mouthwatering poem. Best of luck in the contest ;0) Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 7/28/2019 10:18:00 PM You make friendship sound soo good, Andrea. A delectable and beautiful metaphorical poem. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/28/2019 9:24:00 PM This one fairly sparkles, Andrea ---and it warms the soul. Bravo. A sure winner. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/28/2019 9:19:00 PM Marvelous metaphors in this wonderfully written poem Andrea. "Honey butter of love" is a brilliant way to end your poem! This is sure to be a top winner. xxoo Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/28/2019 6:58:00 PM Andrea, this poem is so much like you, Luv, Panagiota Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 7/28/2019 6:39:00 PM friendship is as beautiful as this verse you penned! I adore this one :) hugs Login to Reply

Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/28/2019 5:46:00 PM Yammy! Friendship, go away) Login to Reply

John Gondolf Date: 7/28/2019 5:12:00 PM Very nicely written, Andrea, much better than mine. Best of luck in the contest. John Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/28/2019 4:59:00 PM this is wonderful, andrea! i love it! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/28/2019 4:30:00 PM oh how sweet Andrea, a beautiful description of friendship:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply