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Of Fathomless Mercy

OF FATHOMLESS MERCY A surpassing story of old. More than His saintly mother’s loss. Weightier than riches of gold. Lamb’s rhapsody bleeds from the cross. O depths of fathomless mercy! Bloodletting removal of dross. The case for Christ controversy. Lamb’s rhapsody bleeds from the cross. A quietus sounded after the moaning of nails, at a loss to explain cruel crowd’s laughter. Lamb’s rhapsody bleeds from the cross. O eternity pleading life! Droplets of love salting the moss. Looking to cure ALL of men’s strife. Lamb’s rhapsody bleeds from the cross. 3/14/2018 Broken Wing’s Five Words, Please contest story, rhapsody, fathomless, quietus, eternity

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Date: 4/9/2018 11:08:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats to you, Kim.
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:10:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your placement in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, I found it very emotional and moving . .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2018 9:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Constance! Hugs...Kim
Date: 3/14/2018 10:32:00 AM
Well done, Kim. A lovely read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 3/14/2018 8:53:00 AM
You've done this brilliantly Kim, you have a great talent with words. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, my friend!

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