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From the confines of this, as safe a harbor my needs afford, I began my journey. My mind leapt to scale these walls of raveled thoughts into shapes and colors I have no claim too, for places never seen, at a pace to thrust a lifetime into moments with burgeoning fears that it may end without the end that lends any credence to reality. I share no hope of altering its heaving arrogant breath of fear, of joy, of pleasure, of mischief, of pain and loss. It was if I could touch the chill and at the same time share the wonder of its warmth. This dream, the rarest of possessions, never shared, was for a moment as clear as the first ray of sunlight. As I dare open my eyes, it was gone. Leaving me with only a faint and distant memory like the soft echo of sweet perfume and the tragedy of loves lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/10/2016 8:30:00 AM
You've taken something abstract, and through use of such beautifully tangible description, you've made it concrete. Awesome!
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Date: 5/30/2016 3:35:00 AM
That is awesome indeed. I like the flow and the seemingly contradicting complements.
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Date: 5/30/2016 8:30:00 AM
Your comments are so kind, thank you Kai Michael...
Date: 5/23/2016 12:52:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Date: 5/23/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Funom...
Date: 5/22/2016 7:17:00 PM
Lovely write... I have had some very unique dream experiences as well. The best ones never seem to last long enough.
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Date: 5/22/2016 7:40:00 PM
They never seem to do they? Thanks for the visit Chris...
Date: 5/22/2016 8:56:00 AM
Beautifully expressed, Charlie! And a great last stanza! Dreams are mysterious invaders of the mind. How they manifest themselves science nor psychology have yet to explain. Thank you for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Date: 5/22/2016 7:38:00 PM
Very kind of you to pay me a visit Maurice, I appreciate your encouragement...
Date: 5/15/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Richard...
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:05:00 AM
Well worth rereading! Have a great Sunday!!
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Date: 5/15/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Richard...
Date: 5/15/2016 7:10:00 AM
A lovely poem accompanied by an equally delightful picture, Charlie. The land of dreams is hard to describe, even though we've been there many times. Hardly ever the same scenery and emotions; sometimes I wonder if I am supposed to be there at all, or if I'm an intruder!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/16/2016 11:40:00 PM
You are a dreamer Paul! I agree with what charlie said....hugs ~ red...who is dreaming now ~`~~`~~``~~``~~``~```````
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Date: 5/15/2016 7:25:00 AM
I think we all have the same experiences but with varying emotions that make them uniquely personal. I, for one, don't believe dreams can truly be analyzed by others because memories of what happens in them fade so quickly. Thanks for the visit Paul...
Date: 5/14/2016 4:43:00 PM
Wonderful dream expressions here on your poem, Charlie! A pleasure to read today :)
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Laura...
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:18:00 PM
Date: 5/14/2016 10:02:00 AM
Some dreams become such personal adventures, that they are too hard to put into words, but you have made them as if you have been away, another lifetime ago. Lovely poem, Charlie!
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Date: 5/14/2016 10:09:00 AM
They are adventures Carrie,ones with no predictable outcome. Thank you for the kind words...
Date: 5/14/2016 9:59:00 AM
You have some fantastic words and phrases too...burgeoning fears, raveled thoughts...these words can evoke a lot emotions ...Faving this my friend ...A 7 too...cheers ! Redfiery
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Date: 5/14/2016 10:06:00 AM
I've missed you Ms. Red, thanks for re-visiting, Charlie...
Date: 5/13/2016 2:03:00 PM
A very beautiful poem, Charlie. Yes, dreams have a mind of their own and come and go at will, sometimes leaving us wanting more when they suddenly end with no real end. Nicely done. 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 5/10/2016 3:35:00 PM
a very thoughtful one. I loved that last stanza. The whole poem is beautiful
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Date: 5/10/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 5/10/2016 8:02:00 AM
Very moving!
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Date: 5/10/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank You Richard...
Date: 5/9/2016 7:54:00 PM
beautifully penned, wonderful and I love it
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Date: 5/9/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings...
Date: 5/9/2016 2:43:00 PM
This write is literally what dreams are made of! How many times "as I dared open my eyes" and "it was gone" have I wanted to close them again and recapture where it left off!!!! This is so relatable and precise! And yes, these are the "rarest of possessions!" EVER!!!
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Date: 5/9/2016 7:40:00 PM
We've all shared these feelings in wonder of what might have been, for just a few more precious moments of a dream. Thank you Walter, your coments are always a joy to receive...
Date: 5/9/2016 1:24:00 PM
Chilling piece, Charlie....... Enjoyed this
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Wilfred for your kind response. It's always a pleasure to be in touch with a new (to me) poet. Hope to earn another reply in the future. Kindest regards, Charlie...
Date: 5/9/2016 11:56:00 AM
- Dream more beautiful dreams, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:14:00 PM
Sunflowers conjure beautiful dreams, thanks Anne-Lise..
Date: 5/9/2016 11:47:00 AM
such a sweet dream with lovely images, charlie... greaat work!..huggs
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Date: 5/9/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank You Nette...

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