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Of Dreams

Morning glows encounter Youth awakening Upon the dawn. With morning dew Moistening their brow, They cry aloud with life's Promising refrain; Oh, sweet the future, Sweet the dreams they dream! Midday sun arrives And brings the heat of trial, A choice of path to make. Temptation perhaps, Will niche the way, And strife with futile time Marks well the passing Of their strength. Oh, precious are the days, The days of which they dream! The time past eve arrives When darkness grows, And the stars arrive In velvet carriage. Then becomes An age of lending Their dreams to romance, To when gentle kisses Prospered, lifting hope For lives entwined, And hearts remember, Beyond their parting. Oh, how short the years, The years of which they dreamed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/6/2010 5:52:00 PM
This flows so nice , I really enjoyed it!!~Excellent~!!!!!Thanks for your comments~Rick
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:36:00 PM
Reads like a great love story that lasted a lifetime..Keep the romantic pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:40:00 PM
sounds like a start of an epic adventure!
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Date: 7/5/2010 5:04:00 PM
Yes Virginia its all true .. no technology and none wanted there.. the owners only have six people at a hotel.. no facilities.. u are in the woods for personal stuff..haha.. its by invitation only.. my boyfriend knews the guy who runs the copter ride..and its only a half day per six people.. u can eat fruit on the island but watch out for the animals who roam freely.. its gorgeous.. we took two photos ..they don't even want that.. hope this answers your questions.. luv.. nice write too
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